A lone girl wakes up in a white nothingness with nothing but the clothes on her back and a mysterious sword in hand. Left with no memories save for a name, she must venture to a hellish world to find the answers she seeks.
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happy ending ?
also moar
I'm absolutely floored by this. Floored, because this is so well written, the story has started off with a very bloody bang, and i'm loving every word. I love what i've read so far, and i'm looking forward to future chapters.
By the way, I love how you made it very clear, right from the start, that this isnt a nice world shes ended up in. Horror, murder, and monsters right off the bat that left me both horrified and intrigued, wondering what would happen next. I knew something was off about Jessie right from the start, and i admit, i should have pieced it together before it was right in my face, but well done on the execution of that bit of story. I cant wait to see how our favorite sparklehorse will change and grow from this adventure.
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I really appreciate you saying that, especially as someone who's still new to writing.
8666668
Yes, Commander, there will be moar.
Question: Is this going to be a Warriors Return story? Cause I hope so, I haven't found any new ones that are any good.
8667437
I know the feel and I've definitely been playing with the idea. One of the reasons I decided to write this story is because I don't see enough like it. The ones I do see tend to be short and/or unfinished, have major timeskips, or start right after the interesting stuff has already happened. I dislike all of these things.
If I do make a warrior's return scenario, it'll be a sequel for sure AND it'll take place right after the first story ends (again, because I hate timeskips).
Interesting. Tracking.
Sounds promising so far. Go on.
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Thank you, and I will.
(looks at chapter two) Good lord! Why is it so long?
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Explained at the end of chapter two.
Enjoy!
This was an amazing read, and I look forward to see what is in store for --- Sparkle!
Excellent work. I have written a review / recommendation for this fic here.
So far, I'm impressed. Have a follow, and keep up the good work.
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I saw the review and I'm glad I was able to make such an impact on you.
Something like that definitely gives me the motivation to keep doing what I do and I appreciate your input.
I'm liking this, plz keep up the good work :)
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Thanks!
Updates have been slow but I'm getting there.
You, my good sir/madam... are a bloody genius.
This story really has the making of an amazing series, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of this!
Have a Fave, track and follow on me!
8762013
I hope you put up a new chapter soon. The premise and execution is near flawless. And I'm really interested to see where you take this story.
Also I'm taking that Twilight's first name will become a bit of a plot point?
8803160
Thanks for the praise!
Episode II is slowly but surely taking shape and I'm about 7k words in so far.
Her first name will be a plot point for sure, but by the time she remembers her full name, several things will have happened, so we'll just have to wait and see what the future brings.
8803129
Lol, it's not the first time I've had someone say that to me
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And it probably won't be the last I'd imagine.
8807635
Heh, true.
it/it had
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This one is fine, it's a contraction for 'it has'.
Always with the eldritch.