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Everyone's reactions to Spike's and Daring's actions were priceless!
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I know I forgot with a few characters in reactions to some stuff, but I think I got all the important stuff where it needed to go.
While I've been a little irritated by how monotone the story has been, the ridiculousness and immaturity these characters and descriptions are reaching is wearing me down.
Would it kill you to follow through on actual conflict in the story if you plan on making it take several chapters to reach the clop/plot? Or at least give the characters a bit more divergence in terms of how they talk and act? Ive yet to see a conflict that didn't resolve itself with someone waving off the disagreement or it being solved by some dry dialogue.
Also i didn't realize how much hyperinflation type shit was in the story. Thought maybe she'd get some Ds and a bit of jiggle in her ass not the biomass equivalent of a second and third torso hanging of everyone's front.
That was glorious! I love how shameless Daring Do is now!
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I'll endeavor to make the story less bland moving forward
Would that mean Flurry will have another aunt in Daring Do?
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Quite possibly
Hmm, so you think Shining has a Keurig? You know, for his wife’s k-cups.
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lol