A Way Big Problem
Twilight closed the door behind her and sighed. Her night was not going the way she expected it to go at all.
“Something wrong, Twi?” Spike asked from her back as he looked over his shoulder, expecting the other two inside the library to follow them out at any second.
She turned her head slightly and glanced at him. “This night has not been going as planned, at all! First, the entire town seems to get scared at the mere sight of the Princess, and now we have an alien in our home?” She let out another frustrated sigh as she shook her head and began walking.
“Could this night get any worse?” Twilight muttered as she walked further away from the library at a slow pace, waiting on the other two.
“You shouldn't say that, Twi.” Spike sounded concerned as he looked around nervously as if waiting on something to happen.
She rolled her eyes at his antics and stopped ten meters or so from the library. “Don't be silly, Spike. Just because you say that doesn't mean something bad will happen, it's all a coincidence.” She turned around and looked back. Luna was walking towards them with a smile on her face, but Twilight couldn't see Ben. Perhaps he was transforming into his Pegasus form? It did make sense, they didn't want to startle the town any more than they already are. If such a thing was even possible.
“But it does! Just… don't say it, please?” Spike reasoned as he nervously fidgeted on her back, to which she responded with another eye roll.
Luna stopped in front of Twilight and glanced back at the library for a brief second before turning her attention to her.
“Pray tell, Twilight Sparkle. Who is this… Fluttershy the dragon mentioned?” she asked with a small tilt of her head, and Twilight smiled brightly in response.
“Fluttershy’s one of my friends. She can be a bit, well… shy, but hopefully I can convince her to…-” She was interrupted by a huge flash of green light that forced her to suddenly close her eyes and turn her head away from the source.
Luna, who was facing away from the library, wasn't nearly as affected by the light. She squinted her eyes ever so slightly as she looked behind her.
“Ugh, what the hay was that?” Spike asked as he rubbed his eyes.
“Spike, language!” Twilight lectured him with a glare as she briefly glanced at him, to which he responded by raising his arms in surrender.
“Geez, it's just… a....” The words seemed to die in his mouth as his now wide eyes seemed to slowly inch upwards, his jaw dropping.
Twilight blinked and looked back at the library, trying to find what he was looking at.
“What? I don't…” Her mouth ran dry as her eyes finally lingered upwards.
Luna looked at the two with confusion evident on her face, unsure as to what had caused them to react like that.
Before she could turn around and follow their gaze, her answer came in the form of a large shadow that quickly covered the entire area and even the distant hills that could be observed from her position.
Slowly, she swivelled her head to try and spot what had caused the colossal shadow that had blocked her moon's light.
When she spotted the culprit, her jaw hit the floor.
Far away from Ponyville, inside a tall, spiral tower that stretched high above a large castle, Princess Celestia laid on her queen-sized bed.
She couldn't get any sleep, no matter how hard she tried. Her mind always wandered back to her sister, and how the small town was receiving her.
She always knew that they were easy to scare. Too easy, in fact. Easy enough to the point that Luna's presence could cause them to treat her with fear, leaving her baby sister to feel rejected once more.
Celestia wanted to practically fly down there herself to see how everything was going. The only thing stopping her was the hope that Twilight could make her sister feel welcomed and loved by her subjects.
She let out an un-princess-like groan as she twisted and turned beneath her covers for a few more seconds, before she sat up and rubbed her eyes gently, letting out a sigh. “Maybe I should have gone with her…” she quietly told herself, trying to calm her nerves.
“Oh, don't be silly, Celestia. Twilight can handle it… right?” She looked around the room, almost expecting someone to answer her.
She sighed once more and shook her head, laying back down on her bed and pulling the covers back up.
“I'm sure it'll be-” She stopped herself as she noticed the light coming from her balcony fade away, as if something was blocking it.
“Strange, the skies above Canterlot should be clear tonight…” the princess thought to herself.
She slowly sat back up on the bed and looked towards the empty balcony, spotting nothing that could have caused the sudden blockage of light.
“Hm, interesting…” Her horn glowed as she pulled her covers off and swung herself to the side, stretching her wings a bit as she yawned.
With a clop, her hooves met the marble floor as she got up and put on her white fluffy bunny slippers. She pushed herself up and trotted over to the double doors that separated her room from the balcony.
The door was enveloped in a yellow aura as it was pulled open, allowing Celestia to step outside and glance around.
She didn't spot anything out of the ordinary in the skyline of the city, nor was there any clouds in the sky that could have blocked the moon's light.
“Must have been a-” Celestia almost choked on her own words as her eyes finally found their target.
Right on top of Ponyville, a truly colossal creature towered over everything within eyesight, even the mountain Canterlot itself rested on.
The entire body of the creature was a pure white color, with numerous exceptions, such as the upper chest and neck area. The former possessed a crimson colored pattern that stretched all the way to its waist area. A strange hourglass symbol sat in the middle of the aforementioned pattern. The latter was completely black and seemed to extend to the back of its head.
Near the feet of the being, which were thankfully spread apart enough so that it didn't crush the town underneath it, it possessed the same crimson color that it had on its chest, with a very faint white line near the bottom.
Celestia’s mind screeched to a halt as she tried to comprehend the sudden appearance of something bigger than even an Ursa Major. The footsteps alone from a creature of that size would feel like earthquakes, even all the way in Canterlot.
Before she could dwell on it any further, it spoke.
Its voice thundered for miles in all directions, almost as if God himself was speaking. She could feel the tower beneath her shake ever so slightly at the sheer volume. Her ears even folded to the sides of her head out of instinct.
"WAY BIG!"
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Wow. Way Big would eclipse an Ursa Major. Given how big the one from Boast Busters was that we saw at the end compared to the Ursa Minor, I feel it is necessary to say that if Ben could stay in that form permanently, he would be akin to a god to the planet's inhabitants. ALL OF THEM.
Also, the name for the Alicorn, if we're going by Ben naming conventions and what he could come up with, could be Omnia or Omnisa. My reasoning behind this is as such: Omnis is Latin for the word all. Ben becomes an Alicorn, a species that is considered the perfect combination of all Three Pony tribes' strengths. In addition, Celestia and Luna are seen by the common pony as all-powerful beings to the point of godliness/near-godliness. Except that the Omnitrix creates a peak specimen of the race it scans the DNA of, so Ben could very well be closer to all-powerful than the Royal Sisters. So, it would make sense for the name of Ben's Alicorn form to reflect that. In addition, since the transformation turns him female, it would make more sense, at least in my eyes, for the name to sound more feminine.
That's all I got concerning names.
Does Ben here still couldn't control his Omnitrix yet? I'm sure he has better choice than something that would looks, at least, far less threatening.
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Actually, compared to the original prototype and the finished Omnitrix, the Ultimatrix worked quite well, very rarely mis-transforming Ben.
It's said in Omniverse that the whole 'mis-transforming' thing is due to Ben "hitting it too hard" or something, but...eh, Azimuth can be a bit of a troll at times, so I take what he says about his inventions with a pinch of salt.
Then again, the Ultimatrix was the only -trix that was mostly developed by a third party (in this case, Albedo after he stole the prototype - he was the one to add the Ultimate function), so that might have something to do with the mis-transformations...
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I'd love to see Ultimate Alicorn.
That would be badass.
Ok. Looking back on Ultimate Alien, there is one Ultimate form that I didn't question at the time, but looking back, didn't make much sense.
Ultimate Big Chill. Sure, he has a cool fiery look, and instead of ice he uses flames that are so hot they freeze whatever they touch, which yes, it is scientifically possible for a flame to be so hot it feels cold. From what I understand, the Ultimate forms are supposed to be more powerful, evolved versions of the species. In what way does Ultimate Big Chill fit that description? Is he more resistant to heat and fire? If so, why wouldn't Ben just use a form that is resistant naturally, like Swampfire? Someone explain this to me.
Speaking of Ultimates, will we be getting Ultimate Cannonball and Wildmutt? I have a soft spot for the classics, and when I saw Ultimate Cannonball, I was excited. When I saw Ultimate Wildmutt, and HE SPOKE, I flipped my shit. If we do get Ultimate Wildmutt, I bet one pony is going to ask if he is some form of deformed Manticore, because of his coat and scorpion-like tail. And now I want to see Ultimate Wildmutt fight a Manticore.
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I like that name, it sounds pretty cool. And yeah, Way Big could solo almost everyone in Equestria, with the exception of discord, I think.
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Would he need his Ultimate form to beat Tirek, or would he just be able to curbstomp the centaur, both in a figurative and literal sense?
And Way Big could solo almost anyone, period.
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Well Big Chill's race did live in space, so extreme heat and cold resistances would be natural features. My biggest Question that Big Chill brings up is what happen to Ben's offspring?
As for more forms any sapient species on Equestrian is ripe for scanning. He' got pony and dragon but there are also diamond dogs, minotuars, zebras, griffons, hippogriffins, changelings, abyassians(cat people), anthromophic parrots, Centaurs and Gargoyles
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Maybe.
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I am now picturing Ben as a Centaur. I am having a hard time picturing it. Also, would the changeling DNA turn him into a drone, a queen, or a king/whatever Thorax is? I am leaning more towards a changeling king.
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I just about passed out laughing. Yes!! The omnitrix gave him the wrong alien!
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Well I'd guess he would end up like Thorax.
The bunny slippers part almost made me die from laughter. GOod choice.
Also, for new names. If he changes into a changeling, how about Obsidian?
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Now the question is, does she have one for every hoof, or just for her front hooves?
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I think for all hooves.
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Yeah, and now I think we know why here is no Easter bunny episode in Equestria.
Also, my suggested names for Ben's pony worms are as following.
Alicorn Form: Epona, Sacred Guardian, Equinox, Sleipneir (This name could work for the Earth Pony form as well.)
Pegasus Form: Hermes, Sky Lord, Apollo, Perseus, Panduro
Unicorn Form: Nox, Axellos, Arcane Might, Uniforce.
Earth Pony Form: Heracles, Equos, Strong Hooves,
Bat Pony/Thestral Form: Hades, Dark Wings, Vampony, Lord Ponulla, Aluhorse.
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Yeah, cause Angel aint an Easter bunny.
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Yeah, more like the Hell Bunny. also, what did you think of my name suggestions?
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Not bad. Not bad at all.
And goodbye discretion. For how smart Azmuth is, he sure lacks good sense. With how many time this kind of incident happened, he could have implanted a feature that allows Ben to temporary lock aliens that he judge inappropriate for some situation.
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He's never used mythological names for his forms. They have always been some form of wordplay on what the form's appearance and/or powers consist of.
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Yeah, but it is kind of difficult to pick a fitting name for the pony forms, so I just tried to pick what names would be fitting, besides. I think at least it is worth considering it, rather then giving them weird names like PonyBen, AliBen, PegaWing and so on. Ben does not always have the best naming sense.
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The transformation could be incomplete, you know, like Ghostfreak. Perhaps it is limited in its current state?
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We'll, in the show, the Ultimate Aliens wern't natural; they were the theoretical evolved forms of aliens that were put in dangerous scenarios by the Ultimatrix.
Not a had chapter, but it seems like you're trying to fit as many new aliens as you can in every new chapter to the point that it feels forced.
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This chapter was entirely left up to a randomizer. I saw someone telling me to basically roll a die when it came to getting an alien from time to time, so I decided to do it and see how it would turn out.
I put NRG, Armodrillo, His Pegasus, Dragon and Alicorn transformation, and Way Big.
Needless to say, Way Big came up the two out of three times I rolled.
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Ultimate transformations are the product of a one million year worst case scenario the Ultimatrix puts the DNA of aliens through. And since Alicorns are their own subspecies, they have their own DNA.
Could this night get any worse?
and then
WAY BIG!
For the Pegasus you could go with Windrunner or something similar.
The Alicorn form could be called Mythic or Mythicorn to reflect the fact that its a combination of two mythical creatures.
The dragon could be called King Draco
wait, Ben seemed perfectly capable to control who he turns into through the story, so why is he having trouble now?
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YAY! The one constant across all the Ben 10 series! Randomly getting the wrong alien! Glad to see that is here!
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Ben sometimes hits the dial too hard, as stated by Azmuth, and can get the wrong alien as a result.
8592007
Tis a good story. Cant wait for more.
Is this going to be a harem story without the clop?
I just thought of a good idea. A timber wolf transformation.
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Nope, Ben will only be with one other, no groups.
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Oh my god! What's gonna happen when he gets a sample of Discords DNA and worse goes ultimate with it!!
So is the Alien Ben was talking about using on Diagon Alien X
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Maybe.
Dude, you need to stop giving away what alien Ben will turn into with the chapter titles.
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That won't work, since, as far as I can tell, timber wolves aren't sapient. Thus the Ultimatix won't scan them.
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My best guess, an abomination that can easily rival Diagon. Or destroy the universe.
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Ok. BUt it "wood" be interesting!!
Very interesting story. Shame it takes so long to update.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211585/reviewers-cafe/thread/308771/reviews?page=7#comment/6275653
From the way you made it sound like Ben was in the Golden Oaks Library, when he transformed. If that is the case it would be funny if instead of destroying the library entirely, he was wearing it like it was a hat.
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After reading what is up so far I must say I am interested, to see where it goes, however I feel I must give some constructive criticism, for going forward. First the pacing seems a little off, I mean, at this point your going to have Ben cycle through ever transformation he has before they reach Fluttershy’s cottage. Secondly, I am aware you used a randomiser to select Waybig, but I kind of feel like he should not have been put in the randomizer to begin with, as he feels to out of place and is sort of a lazy way to create conflict. I can’t really see a reason Ben would stay Waybig long enough for Celestia to gather her guards and make it to Ponyville, I also don’t see Celestia being stupid enough to approach a creature Waybig’s size without the mass of an army behind her, and all having Ben revert back before she gets there is going to do now is cause her to seem crazy, or have her start doubting her own eyes.
Another thing, (though this is more of a nitpick) is I wish you would have just made Ben’s Pegasus form, his default form. As we have seen from Equestria Girls, humans coming over to Equestria, from their world, turns into ponies, and I like to believe that Equestria causes that and not the portal, as maybe Equestria has some form of magic that causes beings not native to the planet to become that species. It would have also made more sense and would not have needed Ben to waste a transformation on gaining a pony form when his base form could have been used instead.
Finally, I feel you need to slow down on using the new transformations that Ben gets I mean the reveal of his Alicorn form feels rushed and feels to not serve any purpose other than to show off the DNA scan function. I feel it would have been better to just have made Luna take Ben’s word for it, and then later on, when Twilight and her friends were formally introduced to Ben, and they knew what he could do, then have him become that form either intentionally, as it maybe the only form that could help in the situation, or as a funny accidental transformation in the heat of battle, as the momentary distraction of finding out he was a female could have gave the bad guy he was fighting the upper hand, and it could have had him feel a little more uncomfortable using the form as he would see it embarrassing instead of just brushing it off like he did.
Please let the next chapter come soon!! Also, how about a Timberwolf transformation.
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Do you intend on updating this story?
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Yes, I do. I can't give an exact date, but it'll be updated soon, hopefully.