Here's what the folks running Sexty Minute Ponies had to say:
The chess game added a lot of nice tension to the sex, which I really enjoyed, and I was impressed by the technical detail in how it was written. My favorite detail from the story was this one though: “a lifetime of experience using their mouths and tongues made Earth ponies legendary for their oral sex skills.” I’d never thought of that before but that’s totally a headcanon for me now. And I just loved the title. Nice work!
Interesting...very very interesting. Both 'events' had my focus equally, though I'm not good in the slightest about all these terms. It's a very visual game for me, more than something that can be described in literary terms.
Oh, and the sex was good too, but I'm not sure if 'magic' can take on a physical form, unless Twilight was using something.
I just think it would be more Pinkie, if instead of saying "absototally!" She says "Absototallutely!" Just wanted to give you my input on that. I did one of these, in an hour, it hasn't been approved yet, but you should check it out when it it. ^.^
Hmmm, no.
Here's what the folks running Sexty Minute Ponies had to say:
The chess game added a lot of nice tension to the sex, which I really enjoyed, and I was impressed by the technical detail in how it was written. My favorite detail from the story was this one though: “a lifetime of experience using their mouths and tongues made Earth ponies legendary for their oral sex skills.” I’d never thought of that before but that’s totally a headcanon for me now. And I just loved the title. Nice work!
Which was nice to read. Thanks!
The chess game is this one: http://www.chessgames.com/perl/chessgame?gid=1473052
This was... Funny?
This is amazing. And will be the first clop I have favorited, instead of laughing at it and clicking to the next story.
Bravo.
Interesting...very very interesting. Both 'events' had my focus equally, though I'm not good in the slightest about all these terms. It's a very visual game for me, more than something that can be described in literary terms.
Oh, and the sex was good too, but I'm not sure if 'magic' can take on a physical form, unless Twilight was using something.
I just think it would be more Pinkie, if instead of saying "absototally!" She says "Absototallutely!" Just wanted to give you my input on that. I did one of these, in an hour, it hasn't been approved yet, but you should check it out when it it. ^.^
i.neoseeker.com/mgv/60953-Shadow%20of%20Death/953/85/rainbow_dash_seal_of_approval_by_lemonyhoovesd3d8vey_display.png
will be reading the rest of this later. well done
Ha! It's the sexual equivalent of Chess Boxing.