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All I can say about this last chapter is that is was... interesting, but not really my thing.
For the story so far, well done. I approve the style of this story and wouldn't mind to seeing more of it.
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Great work
My Spider-sense and possible fore-shadowing say she is going to be proven incorrect about her statement.
More please
When the next chapter coming out
Damn... She killed the opposent hives off and/or assimilated the remains STILL CANT manage love collection in secret? There is
Equestria
Griffonia
Minatoria
Aquestria
Etc.
Chrysalis cant be so incompetent to not have massive opportunity to spread out and collect from all nations.
She has literally no other hives claiming them according to the Hive message.
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Who is 'she?
That are contradictions that are mutual exclusive
The 'and' must be changed to 'or' .
How does that work? She was standing on all four previous paragraph.
*pop* noice
those are some big balls, are they going to see any more action anytime soon or is this just being used as a plot point?
Asking because curious, love the rest of the story though, just can't figure out what to say about it.
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Most likely she's gotten a little drunk on victory and power, and decided that wants more
Good to see the mistakes are fixed. Good to be now certain about everylings fate.
As well the improved details of the story. Very nicely done.
They are Ponystyle... Dont think she has the liberty to use her hind legs for anything else than holding herself and her lovers body stable standing.
Well gee, this happened.
Huh. Either he's big-braining or something weird happened...
That is the most ridiculous thing I've ever read outside of one of Ethesto's crackfics. I was going to request if clop scenes could be marked in the future, but there were at least three important plot details that I would have missed if I skipped that, and I would have missed out on that gem up there, too.
So fast, I think the main character must have forgotten who he is.
*Mr
Actually, since you're not even putting a name after that you could just write mister, it would look better.
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Fixed this one too, thank you again
Replacement fake balls just to outright prevent pregnancy is hilarious and a genius move.