Twilight's ex-rivals are so different. The only thing that bounds them together besides hunger for power and love of sorcery is the common passion for the adorable purple girl.
I know it is an...exotic way to post a story. But my inspiration worked in such a way, haha. Do not worry, the chapters are supposed to be more like little stories united by one topic, they can be read in any order.
Sorry! I quite honestly just wanted to check how people would react to my writing and the second chapter seemed more logically complete that the first one, that is still in progress!
“T-t-these are naughty books! These are kinds of books you can’t read until you are at a certain age! Why would you bring them to me, you meanie!” Twilight mustered to say before giving out an adorable ‘eek’, dropping the book and covering her red face with her arms.
You really need a native English speaker to go over your writing. I mean, no offense, your English is way better than my skill at any other language, but as it is your prose is very awkward. Fun story, though.
Do you think there is any way I can improve this work in particular and my writing in general on my own? I quite frankly want to stay self-sufficient when it comes to writing. I am still learning to write good fics indeed, but my goal is to master my prose by all means.
8399459 Eh, y'see, English is just a bastard (literally, even; it's an unholy union of Anglo-Saxon, Old Norse, and Norman French mashed together in the most perverse ways possible.). It's big and convoluted and a lot of the time it's just plain stupid. We're really sorry that the Brits and us Americans establishing hegemony over most of the world one after another turned our beautiful, terrible language into the Lingua Franca. It was an accident, we swear.
This all makes it really tough for a non-native speaker to sound 'right' without serious immersion. Hell, I have a buddy at work, smart guy, who's been here for thirty years and I still have to edit his emails for him. But that's okay. Just remember that every good author has a great editor behind them. And this site has a few groups devoted to helping authors find editing help. I'd offer myself, but I'm a completely unreliable flake and you haven't done anything I'm aware of to deserve that level of frustration. Take care and keep writing.
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I know it is an...exotic way to post a story. But my inspiration worked in such a way, haha. Do not worry, the chapters are supposed to be more like little stories united by one topic, they can be read in any order.
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Sorry! I quite honestly just wanted to check how people would react to my writing and the second chapter seemed more logically complete that the first one, that is still in progress!
Hope it is not too much of a trouble ;-;
DDDDDAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW!
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Embarrassed Twi is the best Twi
You really need a native English speaker to go over your writing. I mean, no offense, your English is way better than my skill at any other language, but as it is your prose is very awkward. Fun story, though.
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*dies*
Do you think there is any way I can improve this work in particular and my writing in general on my own? I quite frankly want to stay self-sufficient when it comes to writing. I am still learning to write good fics indeed, but my goal is to master my prose by all means.
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Eh, y'see, English is just a bastard (literally, even; it's an unholy union of Anglo-Saxon, Old Norse, and Norman French mashed together in the most perverse ways possible.). It's big and convoluted and a lot of the time it's just plain stupid. We're really sorry that the Brits and us Americans establishing hegemony over most of the world one after another turned our beautiful, terrible language into the Lingua Franca. It was an accident, we swear.
This all makes it really tough for a non-native speaker to sound 'right' without serious immersion. Hell, I have a buddy at work, smart guy, who's been here for thirty years and I still have to edit his emails for him. But that's okay. Just remember that every good author has a great editor behind them. And this site has a few groups devoted to helping authors find editing help. I'd offer myself, but I'm a completely unreliable flake and you haven't done anything I'm aware of to deserve that level of frustration. Take care and keep writing.
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Haha, thanks for your opinion though! I will do my best, might even look for an editor once I am done.
This is spectacular, your descriptions are better than mine.