8680318 I don't mind gender bending, most of the names are good but why not name Mac something less goofy like Mackenzie? Maybe the early fandom just wasn't as creative as it is today.
Okay this is bothering me as someone who adores Dragon's Dogma, Arisen wouldn't speak like the Equestrians around her, she would speak like season one Luna, that's how the people of Gransys talk. They talk like people in a Shakespere play because Capcom wanted the setting and dialogue to match. Why did you not make that consistent in this fic?
8682576 Cause I'm not a fan of it. Don't get me wrong I still love the game. But I just don't like to write like that. Now if you want to make a dragon's dogma fic like that be my guess, but for me this is how I write it and I'm comfortable with it.
8682624 I apologize for coming off as hostile. I just have a disconnect between my knowledge of the game and Arisen of your fic that constantly crashes the immersion. If Arisen had a Gransys style speaking tic (call me Arisen, if it please you) or a single line of thought about why she's speaking the way she is now would help me connect that disconnect (hehe), then I can say with confidence that Discord did it and any Spiders and Magic style memory peek would also be able to get away with it. I would go with the latter option though because we're in too deep to start adding a character quirk now.
I understand that writing in Gransys style is arduous, I just wish that there was an acknowledgement of it in the fic.
8775603 Yes but what follows usually after such confrontation with Rainbow Dash is the shipping and I can't see that happening this case. But as they say the night is still young
On another note why is it always Rainbow Dash who is the xenophobic twat of the group?
8775876 Fulutters is to damn shy, aj is ok as long as you’re honest, twi? To curious, rarity fashion all day everyday, and pinkie is pinkie. That leaves dash the stariotipical athlete dumb as bricks. Kinda sucks but that’s how it is.
yay!
Is Macareina really Big Mac's rule 63 name? Man that is just a really goofy name in my opinion.
8680299
I will never understand gender bending, but it’s not my book. Still a good chapter, please author may I have some more?
8680318
I don't mind gender bending, most of the names are good but why not name Mac something less goofy like Mackenzie? Maybe the early fandom just wasn't as creative as it is today.
8680333
Possibly it is a funny name
Man, their reaction if she pops a Grand Bolide or Seism.
I just about spit my tea all over my monitor when I read this. It's thaw by the way.
8682192
^_^; thanks for noticing that.
Okay this is bothering me as someone who adores Dragon's Dogma, Arisen wouldn't speak like the Equestrians around her, she would speak like season one Luna, that's how the people of Gransys talk. They talk like people in a Shakespere play because Capcom wanted the setting and dialogue to match. Why did you not make that consistent in this fic?
8682576
Cause I'm not a fan of it. Don't get me wrong I still love the game. But I just don't like to write like that. Now if you want to make a dragon's dogma fic like that be my guess, but for me this is how I write it and I'm comfortable with it.
8682624
I apologize for coming off as hostile. I just have a disconnect between my knowledge of the game and Arisen of your fic that constantly crashes the immersion. If Arisen had a Gransys style speaking tic (call me Arisen, if it please you) or a single line of thought about why she's speaking the way she is now would help me connect that disconnect (hehe), then I can say with confidence that Discord did it and any Spiders and Magic style memory peek would also be able to get away with it. I would go with the latter option though because we're in too deep to start adding a character quirk now.
I understand that writing in Gransys style is arduous, I just wish that there was an acknowledgement of it in the fic.
8682771
It's fine, no worries
Is it just me or does Rainbow Dash need to get pimp slapped.
8700703
Well you can't blame her for being like this with someone who appeared out of the everfree forest ^_^;
8702669
I don't know maybe. It just seems that you're making her a little too over paranoid. But other than that great story!
8702683
Dash is a punch first regret later type of gal.( they all kinda are granted but yah)
8775603
Yes but what follows usually after such confrontation with Rainbow Dash is the shipping and I can't see that happening this case. But as they say the night is still young
On another note why is it always Rainbow Dash who is the xenophobic twat of the group?
8775876
Fulutters is to damn shy, aj is ok as long as you’re honest, twi? To curious, rarity fashion all day everyday, and pinkie is pinkie. That leaves dash the stariotipical athlete dumb as bricks. Kinda sucks but that’s how it is.