Dude... This is f***ing awesome. I love dragon's dogma. I'm playing it right now for the Xbox one. I'm about to start the griffon hunt. On the 360 I beat the main story line 6-7 times to get to lv100 and beat bitterblack isle once. Took me almost an hour and a half to beat the first Damian with the assassin class. Don't know if that's his name but whatever. Love this story so far. Keep it up. thumbs.gfycat.com/ParchedAbandonedGodwit-size_restricted.gifi0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/590/222/76a.gif
I am intrigued, so I'll be having a look. Also it's spelled Arisen. You kind of goofed up in the title a bit.
8613182
But I spelled Arisen right. Right?
8613192
Actually in the title you spelled it Arisin, but spelled it Arisen, the correct way in the description.
8613218
Oh I thought you ment the chapter title XD Thanks for pointing that out
8613222
You're welcome, though it would have been more helpful if I'd been a little more specific. It's was just a silly little gaffe anyway.
8613229
It's fine, no worries ^_^
Okay I've noticed a few thing in the chapter that need fixing too.
First
, that would be which. Second
, Apple Bloom is two words, and you forgot the ' in Twilight's. Also I saw a missing space somewhere, but I forgot where exactly.
There are very few errors here. Nice job.
Dude... This is f***ing awesome. I love dragon's dogma. I'm playing it right now for the Xbox one. I'm about to start the griffon hunt. On the 360 I beat the main story line 6-7 times to get to lv100 and beat bitterblack isle once. Took me almost an hour and a half to beat the first Damian with the assassin class. Don't know if that's his name but whatever. Love this story so far. Keep it up. thumbs.gfycat.com/ParchedAbandonedGodwit-size_restricted.gif i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/590/222/76a.gif
8613262
Okay. Thanks
8613300
Same here. Glad you love the story
Awesome story!
WOOHOO!!!
This will be epic!!
Dragon's Dogma is an incredible game!!!
OH. MY. FUCKING. GOD! I literally just bought Dark Arisen today! Holy Crap!
OHHHH YESSS!
8616121
Didn't expect to see you here my friend :3
magic knight