Kindred! Booyah!!

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Totally! I just hope I can write this story right.

Other than typos/grammar issues, you're off to a good start.

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My Nemesis... grammar!

And Thanks^^

YAAAAAY!
Kindered won!
WOHOOOOOO!

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But remember, when the Story sucks, it was your fault... #Sarcasm

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It won't suck. The grammar might be a bit off but otherwise it is farily interesting.... unlike other stories *shudder*

Hey, if you need a proofreader I can fix any small grammatical mistakes here and there.

i had to look up this character i'd seen her before but didnt know her name or powers and after learning these things i want more of this

huzzah the fun has been doubled with wolf and lamb

....Ok, that's funny.. our stories almost have the same amounts of like/dislikes at this time.

The idea is interesting but can't really say more at this point from what little was written.
Will look at the following updates before giving my opinion.

"Tell me little lamb, what things are ours to take?"

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“All things, dear Wolf.”

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That's only fair. I hope I will not disappoint.

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Thanks for the offer. I will think about it^^

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Updates could take a while to come. I have a few other stories I have to write first.

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Not sure if it's fun for everyone^^

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They are propably even the same people ;)

LOVE IT!! XD

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Thanks! And also thanks for the Fav^^

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and i added it to multiple bookshelves

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You seem to really like this first chapter, when you have it in multiple bookshelfs^^ I just hope I can keep up the good work...

It's a Kindred story!! But.... Displced.... But, but... Kindred! But Displaced.... groans and reluctantly tracks

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Oh... I'm sorry to half disappoint...

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It's ok, I jus thave a burning hatred for the shitty community surrounding Displaced stories.

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Oh... ok.

I still hope you will enjoy the story at least a bit. Until another Kindred story raises that is not a Displaced.

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Like I said, I don't mind the stories. It's the community surrounding them I dislike.

Before I read this, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

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That's for later chapter. The first chapter is safe. But Kindred is the Twin essence of Death and that means, there will be certainly death in one form or another later on.

If you want to learn more, read this:
http://gameinfo.euw.leagueoflegends.com/en/game-info/champions/kindred/

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I didn't read the whole thread and thought you meant league community.
Also it helps to only read stories and not delve into communities. I've not come across a bad experience on this site since 2013 doing that.

Grate chapter keep it up

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Thanks. I will do my best.

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holy hell you picture is creepy

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Yea it creepy you can't tell it is a mask or is it real

is everything alright? I mean I know you like updating all of your stories but its been a while.

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Don't worry. Everything is alright... more or less. Nothing dramatic or so, but I found a little problem with the lore of Kindred and how I should write her, them, him... whatever. There are just so many possibilities!!!

To make one thing clear: I WILL continue this story soon. I already decided, after I finish one last chapter, I will continue with this story.