A reasonable start, although mildly disappointing that it hasn't reached the clop yet (but with only one chapter so far it isn't a problem by any means). I'll keep an eye on this one.
8212601 Rumble should have been paying attention in class, and SB and AB should know that if your friend has a crush on someone then they’re off the table so to speak. It’s a rule of honor.
8212604 What implies that he wasn't paying attention in class? And remember that nothing official has been made between Rumble and Scootaloo. And blame MrBroniac for this 'cause he requested I write this. If it were up to me, I would have replaced Rumble with Spike or some other colt.
8212620 I’m not blaming anyone I’m just getting into the story while it’s still Teen and having some fun. By the time it hits M hopefully I’ll be done.
A reasonable start, although mildly disappointing that it hasn't reached the clop yet (but with only one chapter so far it isn't a problem by any means).
I'll keep an eye on this one.
Needs more boning! Get to the boning!
So Sweetie Belle has a crush on Spike? Verdict for this, happening or not?
Ohhhhh! It's staaaaaaarting!
No idea why you decided to add some Rumbaloo and SweetieSpike hinting in this story though. It was just random.
8183860 Because they make adorable couples!
8183798 Don't know yet. That depends on MrBroniac.
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8183798
Nah. Rumble gets all the hot fillies for himself.
Can i get the derpibooru ID for the cover art? If it is derpi?
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8184121 I tried to find it, but couldn't. It must have been taken down, for whatever reason. I'm sorry.
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Sad face.
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I found it. ID 739269
8184279 Yep! That's the one!
Wow. So that's how Sugar Cube Corner serves their milkshakes now, huh?
8184349 I didn't notice that before. Fixed.
8184602 Awwwwwwwww... the original was better...
8184795 So was the weight gain discussion, but I took it out.
8196149 I don't know.
Rumble you stupid idiot didn't you pay attention in class?!?! And Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom fore shame fore shame.
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What?
8212601
Rumble should have been paying attention in class, and SB and AB should know that if your friend has a crush on someone then they’re off the table so to speak. It’s a rule of honor.
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What implies that he wasn't paying attention in class? And remember that nothing official has been made between Rumble and Scootaloo. And blame MrBroniac for this 'cause he requested I write this. If it were up to me, I would have replaced Rumble with Spike or some other colt.
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I’m not blaming anyone I’m just getting into the story while it’s still Teen and having some fun. By the time it hits M hopefully I’ll be done.
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So you'll stop reading the story as soon as we get to the sexy bits?
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You say it like it's strange.
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Nah, it's not strange.
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Stranger than fiction.
it's fanfiction