HAHAHAH! The bloody blue screen! Oh I just can't wait for the next chapter even though I do't wan't to say that so I don't pressure the author. OOOOOHHH, I can't wait to see twilight's other "Foul" that needed to be kept in check!
If they reached the point where gravity reverse that would mean they reached the planets molten core.
And then created two holes that exposed said molten core to the surface......that.....is not good for a planet....that actually most likely would kill the planet as all the magma and bits of the core would now come rushing g out do to pressure.
Add in global quakes, not sure how strong as wasn't said but a punch hardening the shake a planet with each hit.
And the human survived this.
These humans could very easily win any fight, no real contest with that level of power on their side.....how did Twilight escape again I know I didn't read the opening and such but....I am having trouble believing she actually did escape and this isn't some sort of simulation they plugged her into now as the power being displayed is beyond absurd.
Not to mention why a single scientist is sent to do the job of soldiers
"We're here to see Dragon Lord Spike." Twilight said. The group of dragon guards laughed a hearty laugh. Both Flash and Twilight had looks of confusion on their faces.
"You want to see Dragon Lord Spike, ha don't make me laugh ponies. He may be an ally to Equestria, but he wouldn't waste time talking to little ponies like you." Said one of the dragon guards.
"I think he'll want to see me, tell him Twilight Sparkle is here to talk with him." Said Twilight. The guards shared a look with each other.
"Did you say Twilight Sparkle?" Asked one of the guards. Twilight nodded in response. The gathered dragons all gasped and bowed with respect.
Oh good grief... when this Blood character came in, it all turned to one massive bullshit cliche.... Oh, but we need a villain to fight He is so OP. NANOMACHINES, SON! etc, etc, etc....
I swear... my eyes felt like bleeding acid....
No offense, but this fic just got a bit too chaotic and cliche for me... Still a decent fic even if i can't really enjoy it after this chapter. Hope you have a good time writing the rest of it
Twilight and the Commander sat at a table in Pony Joe's Donut Diner. A few hours ago her and the Commander were testing out the Yautja weapons she had with her. First Twilight showed the Commander the retractable spears, then the wrist blades, then the mauls, then the constrictor nets, and then some of the armor and masks, and for the grand finale the plasma casters. To say the Commander was excited about the guns destructive power was an understatement, and under no circumstances did she squeal like a school fully. That's what she said at least, but Twilight will remember that day as one of her best.
yes
Laying it a little thick on the star wars reference there at the end
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Lol, twas not my intention.
..... now twilight will have so many questions to ask, like why she was lie to all her life, why was she a unicorn........
HAHAHAH! The bloody blue screen! Oh I just can't wait for the next chapter even though I do't wan't to say that so I don't pressure the author. OOOOOHHH, I can't wait to see twilight's other "Foul" that needed to be kept in check!
Tattoos it's inspiration on its face.
If they reached the point where gravity reverse that would mean they reached the planets molten core.
And then created two holes that exposed said molten core to the surface......that.....is not good for a planet....that actually most likely would kill the planet as all the magma and bits of the core would now come rushing g out do to pressure.
Add in global quakes, not sure how strong as wasn't said but a punch hardening the shake a planet with each hit.
And the human survived this.
These humans could very easily win any fight, no real contest with that level of power on their side.....how did Twilight escape again I know I didn't read the opening and such but....I am having trouble believing she actually did escape and this isn't some sort of simulation they plugged her into now as the power being displayed is beyond absurd.
Not to mention why a single scientist is sent to do the job of soldiers
Of course they would all bow she is Spike's mum
Will this awesome story ever continue??
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Yes it will. I'm sorry that the update schedule is slow. Hopefully the new chapter will be up soon.
Oh good grief... when this Blood character came in, it all turned to one massive bullshit cliche....
Oh, but we need a villain to fight He is so OP. NANOMACHINES, SON! etc, etc, etc....
I swear... my eyes felt like bleeding acid....
No offense, but this fic just got a bit too chaotic and cliche for me... Still a decent fic even if i can't really enjoy it after this chapter. Hope you have a good time writing the rest of it
shit please no Flash
gun's
filly
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Ah, thank you for pointing those out
Well that would explain the multiple personalities
Well plot twist