this is primarily a writing experiment

Everything we write is an experiment, friend. Every time I delve into a new fic I try something new.

Good to see this launching, and I think you chose a good time. I'm glad I could be a part of this story.
It was damn funny, as well.

hooray for Muro cover!

Very well done my friend, I'm proud of you! Incredible improvements, thanks for taking my words to heart. I really enjoyed the read, keep it up!

This was an interesting story so far. I haven seen a really good story with the protagonist is bisexual. I like the inversion of the expected roles of the parent which make it hilarious how his mother is so desperately want her son to be trait while his father is surprisingly accepting with what he seems to 'thinks' is his son's choice. It is interesting how his father can enter his son's world being also a guy by showing complicit with him, which is something the opposed wouldn't really work with the mother, who despite sowing as much sympathy her son wouldn't really feel that she understand what she is going through. I love the behavior of the mother, and I hope she will keep on becoming weirder as she becomes desperate in what she think she can redirected he son orientation by .

I wish their where more bisexual stories that is haft as interesting as this.

Interesting premise so far there aren't alot of stories with a bisexual main character, and none as interesting as this one. Your transitions between scenes is something I haven't seen in written story's before. So far you've got my attention well done

Even for a fic with gay stuff in it this has an unusual ratio of dislikes, specially considering how well written it is

8085225 I might be the unorthodox writing style perhaps, or maybe they just thought they'd be getting more. I already have the second chapter finished, and I considered putting it on hiatus because I thought I had written it terribly. But thank you for reassuring me that it's not that bad. I just wish people left comments expressing what they didn't like about it.

I'm holding out on reading this for a little bit, just because of time factors over here, but I *want* this story to be good, very badly. Hopefully it works out, but rest assured, I'll let you know if it needs help. I'm a jackass that way.

8085411 I appreciate it, thank you.

good story so far

I leave this site for a year and this was the first story I read. This had me laughing so hard. I can't even! Keep up the good work!

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Thank you, this comment is very much appreciated.