First off thanks for your comments and the support that i have seen for this story.
Second, i would like to say that i will try to make the story more pleasing to the eyes but the grammar probably wont change much so please don't pay too much attention to it and just enjoy the story for what it is. This means that the way the story looks will change, including the "color" for the speakers, so we shall see how this goes.
Third, if the changes become too much of a pain in the ass i will go back to writing the story how i have been.
Thats about it i don't know when ill get to do another chapter but i will make sure this story goes on.
to Ethrak, thank you for the advice i did kind of figure that out though, that is why i put the update in my story,. As for my intended audience, yes it is a story more for me but i wanted to make one that is fun to read as well (even though grammar with writing has never been my strength obviously) so again thank you for the advice it is much appreciated.