Jack's life should get better. This is Equestria, a land of love, tolerance, and monster attacks. He has a chance to pull himself up by his own will and determination. please run with that.

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I already plan on good things to happen to him, but I know how I could also turn those into a proverbial hell for him, I would prefer to keep it to mostly physical pain rather than emotional.

8036280 Thank you for the clarification. Physical pain is easier to bear. Pain is just weakness leaving the body, right?

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Yes, in a way, though if I have enough people want me to emotionally hurt him, It would still be able to be tied into a certain development in his character that I have planned that would be rather Earth shattering for him. But I agree with you're point, physical pain is easier to bear, as it usually leaves quicker than emotional pains.

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, Also, can you be a little more specific please, if you're going to criticize, at least leave constructive criticism rather than just saying "get help", that's just annoying as hell.