Monster, beast, father. The Lancer, perfection in near human form, was to be the next generation of Little Sister protection. However, getting ambushed by Splicers and a Alpha on a mission put an end to it. A second chance was offered in Equestria...
8054078 Having read the new chapter: we're moving things along. It's unfortunately a little slow going, but that's life.
The good news is that we're meeting the pones.
Unfortunately nothing has happened that's really pulled me in beyond an interesting premise and decent writing mechanics. It's enough to keep reading, but not enough for me to drop what I'm doing.
Hopefully that changes once he starts interacting with the ponies.
He seems surprisingly thoughtful for a big daddy, and self aware.
Assuming he still can't speak... hell, even if he could that helmet is still welded to his skin, no-one could hear him anyway... I wonder how he will deal with living obstacles now that he isn't aloud to simply walk over them? Walk around them?
See, Pinkie doesn't break the laws of physics, she literally befriended them and they enjoy playing around the eccentric mare. Breaking them would hurt them, and Pinkie Pie always makes it a point to never hurt her friends; especially the abstract ones.
I will now go and post this to every story that claims otherwise.
I will admit that I was excited about the idea that the big daddy is more machine then alive. I immediately thought that story would be of it discovering itself and it's little sister. It would be figuring out life while being in a new world, just trying to protect it's daughter/lilsister (while she constantly tried to make friends/cause trouble). While this route is not being taken (I honestly don't know why I had that whole story pop in my head), I am still interested (if not a bit saddened that it's whole thing changed in the very first chapter) in seeing where this goes. Anyway, keep up the good work.
8111505 Your shouted support will be repaid IN KIND! 8076085 I foresee a brick wall in my near future... 8074561 Stop! Unlicensed thief! Someone call the City Watch! 8064129OKAY! 8062899 Actually, you're not too far off... 8062590 Stop waiting! 8062110 Go forth with your theories and thesis that will bring you only infamy... 8054993 His helmet, welded to his face... Well, we may see. Also, he'll still walk THROUGH obstacles! He'll just be a bit less likely to see everything as an obstacle. 8054936 And done. Now to go eat a sandwich. 8054106 It's still going slow, but hey! There's a princess! When has anything ever had a decent, intelligent first contact with Equestrian royalty?
Next chapter will be posted in five, four, three, two...
8054056 "its" is the possessive form, "it's" is the contraction of "it is"
I was saying that aside from those two lines, every place "it's" was in the chapter should be "its"
8054064 Oh! Okay, thanks. I'll go through that and fix it soon.
8054078
Having read the new chapter: we're moving things along. It's unfortunately a little slow going, but that's life.
The good news is that we're meeting the pones.
Unfortunately nothing has happened that's really pulled me in beyond an interesting premise and decent writing mechanics. It's enough to keep reading, but not enough for me to drop what I'm doing.
Hopefully that changes once he starts interacting with the ponies.
Please continue
He seems surprisingly thoughtful for a big daddy, and self aware.
Assuming he still can't speak... hell, even if he could that helmet is still welded to his skin, no-one could hear him anyway... I wonder how he will deal with living obstacles now that he isn't aloud to simply walk over them? Walk around them?![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
I will now go and post this to every story that claims otherwise.
8062141 Actual novel that explains the conception, birth, life and death of Rapture in a amazing story.
Man that was good can't wait for the next chapter
I will admit that I was excited about the idea that the big daddy is more machine then alive. I immediately thought that story would be of it discovering itself and it's little sister. It would be figuring out life while being in a new world, just trying to protect it's daughter/lilsister (while she constantly tried to make friends/cause trouble). While this route is not being taken (I honestly don't know why I had that whole story pop in my head), I am still interested (if not a bit saddened that it's whole thing changed in the very first chapter) in seeing where this goes. Anyway, keep up the good work.
MOAR!!!!!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
8054993 Yeah, Faust Herself gave him a program update to do that, or did you miss the clues?
8062354
This line is brilliant, I may steal it
Ill try my best to wait patiently for the next chapter.
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I NEED A NEW CHAPTER DAMNIT!
8111505 Your shouted support will be repaid IN KIND!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
8076085 I foresee a brick wall in my near future...
8074561 Stop! Unlicensed thief! Someone call the City Watch!
8064129 OKAY!
8062899 Actually, you're not too far off...
8062590 Stop waiting!
8062110 Go forth with your theories and thesis that will bring you only infamy...
8054993 His helmet, welded to his face... Well, we may see. Also, he'll still walk THROUGH obstacles! He'll just be a bit less likely to see everything as an obstacle.
8054936 And done. Now to go eat a sandwich.
8054106 It's still going slow, but hey! There's a princess! When has anything ever had a decent, intelligent first contact with Equestrian royalty?
Next chapter will be posted in five, four, three, two...