Monster, beast, father. The Lancer, perfection in near human form, was to be the next generation of Little Sister protection. However, getting ambushed by Splicers and a Alpha on a mission put an end to it. A second chance was offered in Equestria...
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8023469 Twilight, I stole your magnifying glass for a total stranger to use and never return! Yes, the one you got back in magic kindergarten! Oh shit.
8023813 The promise I make everytime I write something is to always bring an unexpected twist! You may've seen through my first attempt, maybe even my second and third, but I'll still bring the crazy!
8023983 See above and I hope you didn't pass out. Sorry if you did, I claim no responsibility for my lack of upload scheduling.
8024071 You could make another account, but that would be cheating and cheating is wrong. Okay, maybe cheat a little.
8024456 Huh, most times people make their first wish for a sandwich or something simple and idiotic. You'll rule the world yet, you'll rule the world yet.
8024788 Thank you, I hope the next chapter, number three, will be awe inspiring!
8029150 The first one, it is fits better than it (possessive) while the second one could be one or the other. Maybe I'm wrong, I have decent grammar not high school graduate grammar. Now, would you kindly tell me when I have your interest, that's my goal!
Interesting start...I shall be watching this story closely.
Interesting, will wait to see more....... Alot of promise with this one
And Faust be Faust!
I to see alot of promise here I shall wait with baited breath for what will hopefully be a great story
Instant Favorite, and wishing I could give this two thumbs
I wish it was possible for me to be even happier.
This is awesome.
Every other instance of "it's" should be "its"
You have my attention.
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8023469 Twilight, I stole your magnifying glass for a total stranger to use and never return! Yes, the one you got back in magic kindergarten!
Oh shit.
8023813 The promise I make everytime I write something is to always bring an unexpected twist! You may've seen through my first attempt, maybe even my second and third, but I'll still bring the crazy!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
8023983 See above and I hope you didn't pass out. Sorry if you did, I claim no responsibility for my lack of upload scheduling.
8024071 You could make another account, but that would be cheating and cheating is wrong. Okay, maybe cheat a little.
8024456 Huh, most times people make their first wish for a sandwich or something simple and idiotic. You'll rule the world yet, you'll rule the world yet.
8024788 Thank you, I hope the next chapter, number three, will be awe inspiring!
8029150 The first one, it is fits better than it (possessive) while the second one could be one or the other. Maybe I'm wrong, I have decent grammar not high school graduate grammar. Now, would you kindly tell me when I have your interest, that's my goal!
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is that a fic and where?
I LIKE it!!![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)