Shining Armor fills the void in his mother's life.
Nice chapter, though there's a recurring spelling error you may want to edit.
"Yes mam."
"Yes mam!" Shining grabbed hold of his mother's flanks again before slamming himself into her.
That should be "ma'am". Also, I think either Shining's spell was either just a light, made him more fertile, or made Velvet ovulate.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
8080431 Thanks. Corrected.
And as to your guess.............
Maybe. Teehee!
8080431 to be fair here in the UK "Mam" is a perfectly acceptable substitute for "Mom" mostly because how bloody weird "mom" sounds in our accent, so depending on how you look at it it's either a spelling mistake or a cheeky little English nod.
8080486 It's supposed to be in the sense of "madam" for this.
8080498 Fair enough, either way i'm loving the story c:
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good job
More? o[o
8150172 There will be. Soon, hopefully. Life has been quite distracting as of late.
8150222My life is hard too my parents were drugatics
Nice chapter, though there's a recurring spelling error you may want to edit.
That should be "ma'am". Also, I think either Shining's spell was either just a light, made him more fertile, or made Velvet ovulate.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
8080431 Thanks. Corrected.
And as to your guess.............
Maybe. Teehee!
8080431 to be fair here in the UK "Mam" is a perfectly acceptable substitute for "Mom" mostly because how bloody weird "mom" sounds in our accent, so depending on how you look at it it's either a spelling mistake or a cheeky little English nod.
8080486 It's supposed to be in the sense of "madam" for this.
8080498 Fair enough, either way i'm loving the story c:
8080471
derpicdn.net/img/view/2017/4/5/1404423__safe_artist-colon-pandramodo_artist-colon-pj-dash-nsfw_starlight+glimmer_animated_dialogue_dis+gon+b+gud_female_food_grin_levitation_magic_mar.gif
good job
More? o[o
8150172 There will be. Soon, hopefully. Life has been quite distracting as of late.
8150222
My life is hard too my parents were drugatics