I may be the black sheep of everypony at the crystal empire and all of Equestria, but one mare doesn't see me like that. Her name is Flurry Heart and she's the best mare a human like me can have.
good job
7926727 that proposal was rushed but still good none the less
Great idea, poor execution.I couldn't help but CinemaSins the whole story.The clop section was too short and uninspired.
Work on improving your writing. Read some of the stories by the greats on this site and learn from what they do.
I think you should think of more words for penis other than 'member', sutch as dick, cock, and pussy spoon. (The last one is what I call my dick XD)
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"Yours looks adorable," she says with a giggle. "Looks like a limp mushroom."
Ouch.. right in the pride.
good job
7926727 that proposal was rushed but still good none the less
Great idea, poor execution.
I couldn't help but CinemaSins the whole story.
The clop section was too short and uninspired.
Work on improving your writing. Read some of the stories by the greats on this site and learn from what they do.
I think you should think of more words for penis other than 'member', sutch as dick, cock, and pussy spoon. (The last one is what I call my dick XD)
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Ouch.. right in the pride.