Rarity has had very few suitors in her day that lasted longer than a fleeting moment. When a strange creature shows up in equestria and pursues her she turns him away but what happens when he suddenly becomes the thing she wants and the tables turn?
What a twist! I just wonder if Fleur really is scheming something or Maya will bring the best of her making her feelings genuily, everything can happen. Also for a brief second I imagine the beginning of a herd…je well that could be an interest development, and hey maybe Rarity and Colorado could start something of their own, it could be a curios surprise, join by love of a alien, stay by the friendship of camaraderie
Gotta say I'm not fond of the direction this chapter went. Only found this story today, but I really liked how it made it plain that Mayes had moved on from Rarity (or at least had been trying to) and wasn't going to take her bullshit again after she shot him down. But then to nearly turn right around and have her save him from the "evil seductress" and have him totally fall in love with her because of that just seems... cheap and not really make much sense. He'd probably just end up even MORE bitter because of it and just say "fuck it" and go full hobo again. I know it (probably) hasn't been written yet, but it just makes me worry.
And besides, why CAN'T we have a good french-pone? There are barely any stories of her with a human at all, let alone good ones like this!
What a twist! I just wonder if Fleur really is scheming something or Maya will bring the best of her making her feelings genuily, everything can happen.
Also for a brief second I imagine the beginning of a herd…je well that could be an interest development, and hey maybe Rarity and Colorado could start something of their own, it could be a curios surprise, join by love of a alien, stay by the friendship of camaraderie
That last sentence smacks of foreshadowing.
And it makes me happy.
This story is greatly unappreciated. Most definitely better than anything I've ever wrote. Keep up the good work!
Gotta say I'm not fond of the direction this chapter went.
Only found this story today, but I really liked how it made it plain that Mayes had moved on from Rarity (or at least had been trying to) and wasn't going to take her bullshit again after she shot him down.
But then to nearly turn right around and have her save him from the "evil seductress" and have him totally fall in love with her because of that just seems... cheap and not really make much sense. He'd probably just end up even MORE bitter because of it and just say "fuck it" and go full hobo again.
I know it (probably) hasn't been written yet, but it just makes me worry.
And besides, why CAN'T we have a good french-pone? There are barely any stories of her with a human at all, let alone good ones like this!
Is this on hiatus?
Need moreof this
So many answers to these problems with a good herd.
This author is a master of suspense.
I think these two mares are scheming on a gangbang.
Totally did not say aloud, “Ooooooh! It’s a threeway!” And laugh at my own idiocy.