The characters seem interesting, although the chapter could use some improvement, especially at the beginning. I was also missing some character descriptions as well as names there. It just was a bit impractical that one had to conclude the names as the story went.
The characters seem interesting, although the chapter could use some improvement, especially at the beginning. I was also missing some character descriptions as well as names there. It just was a bit impractical that one had to conclude the names as the story went.
Also a pity he didn't do the dragoness.