Stella finds a new world full of wonders, what starts as pure research becomes something life changing for her. There are stories with characters dance around each other and finding each other just at the end of the story... this is not one of them.
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Celestia dammit Lyra....
Bonbon, Lyra is your marefriend SO KEEP HER AWAY FROM STELLA BEFORE TWI KILLS THE POOR UNICORN
7801159 Yeah, the poor thing wouldn't have much of a chance.
7801211 still a better love story than twilight.
Fifth paragraph
You have "What do you looking at"
Should be "What are you looking at"
That's all I found, good chapter
Second paragraph:
"As we entered the library again, I brought my new desses up in our room. I decided to let them in this huge bag Rarity had carefully placed them into."
shouldn't that say: "leave them in this huge bag"?
also: "They will be here this evening after Luna raised the moon!"
*raises
7801231 Thanks, will change it right away.
7801245 changed the first thing, but
When they will be here, Luna has raised the moon. Isn't it right to use the past tense ... from this future point of view?
7801312
Not in this case since they are using present tense up to that point and after it. Even when talking about future events, it is always best to keep using the same sense that you were using 99.999% of the time.
7801322 okay. Thanks again.
7801342 CAN DISCORD BRING HER HAND BACK
Celesta?
Luna?
no oh OK I'll just leave now if that is ok
7803310 we never know what the future will bring.
(Looking in the crystal ball) "You will meet a tall handsome stranger"
7803711 I hope u dont mean me, cause imma guy so rethink ur thoughts
7803790 it's just a trope fortune tellers say like "I see great wealth in your future" ;-)
Besides, isn't "stranger" both male and female version? So couldn't that be a tall and handsome girl?
7803310
A deal with Discord... why do I imagine fiddle music in the background for that?
7804077 Dude what r u? He is a human silly! Pinkie I know thatThen Why'd u ask? Ugh.....Pinkie......
7806118 I never said I was human ;-)
And I avoid ever claiming that in from of others.
Lol that's a question I sometimes ask myself.... Is there any freaking pony who isn't horny as hell lol
I was wondering where Lyra was in all the chapters, but here she is!!!! And I love herrrr!!
Your legs and feet are still viable. But I bet you somepony, somewhere has a thing for those too...
8722224
Of course there is :-)
8722224
In a twist of events, the stump will probably be very useful for this sort of stuff... ;]