Stella finds a new world full of wonders, what starts as pure research becomes something life changing for her. There are stories with characters dance around each other and finding each other just at the end of the story... this is not one of them.
Page generated in 0.019 seconds
Total duration
1,016 users online
2,021,971 hits today, 2,130,388 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
"DON'T YOU DARE EXPLAINING THIS TO HIM!", Twilight shouted.
Two ways you could correct it:
"DON'T YOU DARE TRY EXPLAINING THIS TO HIM!", Twilight shouted.
or
"DON'T YOU DARE EXPLAIN THIS TO HIM!", Twilight shouted.
I would go with option one because of the context being used
7849831 Thanks, I changed it. One of the things that seemed perfectly fine to my german eyes, but is wrong.
7849901
that's why you have proof readers
7849928 Thanks, the one I have is german too and I hadn't heard much from, about my last chapters, so I published thus one right away after I had used Grammarly. Lucky me, I have you guys.
I like to imagine twilight is so frustrated and embarrassed that she tosses grammar and proper wording in the garbage... Beats it with a stick... Then disposed of it like any good scientist... With a 45. 1911. if it's a grammar mistake usually I find a way to explain it as most of my friends and colleagues make fun of my horrible spelling and grammatical errors along with my dyslexia. I don't seem to judge people the same
7850008 That's a funny way of looking at it
7850053
Dang right
7849928 Would you maybe look at the next chapter before I publish it?
7852007
I have no problem with that, PM me it, I got a couple hours before church so I would love to help
7852012
> couple hours before church
> before church
> church
Considering the raunchiness of these, not sure if serious or trolling... >_>
"Well, my ma always said ta help others, helpin' others is a virtue she always said."
... ;]