Stella finds a new world full of wonders, what starts as pure research becomes something life changing for her. There are stories with characters dance around each other and finding each other just at the end of the story... this is not one of them.
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this lie will defiantly come back to bite Stella right on the nipple.
I know this is an old story but if you are still online, I want to help you with your story writing. The character's speech sound a bit lifeless. Use "!" for pinkie pie and stuff like that
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That's a good point, I will look into that.
*pomf*
Did you mean safe?
I have noticed a few bits where the tense has changed in odd places. This may just be American English though.
Sorry for commenting so late too.