Damn. I really like where this is going, although I'd like a bit more... Would extrapolation be the correct term here? I don't know, whatever. This is really good in my opinion.
You may ignore the next block of text as I have no idea how to black out text on a phone.
(despite my only experience with writing a story being on hiatus for a few years now) And after spending the last few months obsessing over JoJo, I'd love to see more. I'm currently at part 7 in the manga and I actually enjoy this as much as I enjoy JoJo itself. My only wish is that Platinum should... Mess up a little, maybe? I just kind of want to see how he responds to failure and I have a feeling it'll be a short while before that happens, if at all. Of course, it's your choice as the author whether or not that happens. I also have mixed feelings about him working things out with Luna like that but I can't really complain because she deserves every bit of love she gets...
Anyways, I find your story to be a pretty good read and I hope you continue this Bizarre Adventure. Arrivederci! -Jrock117
Ohhh Spike AND Apple Bloom both have Stands too?! *strokes an imaginary goatee* Interesting. Very interesting.... *laughs a totally not evil sounding laugh*
Crazy Apple and The Claw huh?
Our heroes are not to be burdened by an expy of the Author's namesake in the future, are they?
That'd be a problem, Kira was only defeated by a combination of sheer dumb luck and possibly a bit of intervention from Fate.
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No. Trying to do something a bit different here.
Damn. I really like where this is going, although I'd like a bit more... Would extrapolation be the correct term here? I don't know, whatever. This is really good in my opinion.
You may ignore the next block of text as I have no idea how to black out text on a phone.
(despite my only experience with writing a story being on hiatus for a few years now) And after spending the last few months obsessing over JoJo, I'd love to see more. I'm currently at part 7 in the manga and I actually enjoy this as much as I enjoy JoJo itself. My only wish is that Platinum should... Mess up a little, maybe? I just kind of want to see how he responds to failure and I have a feeling it'll be a short while before that happens, if at all. Of course, it's your choice as the author whether or not that happens. I also have mixed feelings about him working things out with Luna like that but I can't really complain because she deserves every bit of love she gets...
Anyways, I find your story to be a pretty good read and I hope you continue this Bizarre Adventure. Arrivederci!
-Jrock117
Wheres more
Now I want to know if Spike can get a Stand.
ZA CLAWDO!
Ohhh Spike AND Apple Bloom both have Stands too?! *strokes an imaginary goatee* Interesting. Very interesting.... *laughs a totally not evil sounding laugh*