A Spartan story? Well, that explains the need for a human tag. But it looks like the slavery and breeding stud thing is going to be a problem for some readers. Oh well, can't please them all.

Like the story, will continue to read. Later!

I'm having a hard time picturing Moondancer as Captain of the Royal Guard.

"never got right to the point unless they were some country bumpkin" Pert much ended it fur me...

Hot-fucking-damn, I love world building, I love unexplained backstories, It's like a promise of explanations to come.

I love this story, a realistic representation of actual equestrian diplomacy and the female-to-male ratio problem being represented as a birth-rate problem, something that is actually a threat to civilizations all over the world.

u cheeky bastard, take a like and fav

I really love it!

So, while it indeed strange to me, to be used as such,

you need an 'is after it

So far this first chapter is rather good, im intrigued.

a healthy mix of strong and well-trained men and women, also helped.

Seeing as how this is Equestria, shouldn't it be "mares and stallions" (or "stallions and mares", depending on which way you want to go with that)?

Tall, slender, and graced with an impossibly firm and rather bountiful chest that was the envy of women across the kingdom,

...This story isn't tagged anthro (at least not as of this post), yet you're speaking as if Celestia had a human figure.
Is this anthro-equestria?

This isn't even anthro. It's just a human story with MLP names. Downvoted.

Oh.................…….… kinky