Ehh... He's just early in his power curve right now. Eventually he'll figure out his limits and decide/discover exactly how powerful/immortal he may or may not be. But for the moment, he feels like he's on top of the world and he's gonna bring it crashing down. His power isn't something others have, at least not yet. He'll get into that soon.
Short spoiler, it's usually an earth pony only thing, and without ridiculous studying, it's not very useful. Also, earth ponies have been doing it for ages, unconsciously usually. Things like pawing at the dirt near their farm. It usually requires earth pony hooves, which is why he needs to use his hooves for permanent runes. There may have been a few who figured it out, but they never thought to summon a demon with it. Which is sort of what happened. Instead of a demonic possession, he got a Sombranic possession. The possession/gift allows him to use Sombra's magic to "cheat" and make temporary runes very rapidly. This is how he fucks up unicorn magic and creates runes that aren't on surfaces. On top of that, he's got Sombras unicorn magic and an enhanced earth pony build. He's nasty, and nobody knows how to deal with him yet, but he's gonna get his shit pushed if he goes head to head with a real Apotheosis. Even an earth pony who knows just enough to disrupt magic and fuck up his runes could be a problem if he was caught unaware.
But he hasn't figured out too much of this yet. He's just having fun killing ponies and making a mess right now. Maybe that has something to with being possessed by an evil tyrant? Or maybe that's just the kind of asshole he is! Yay!
The Power base is because he doesn't feel like he can control the entire country by himself. He's gonna need ponies to carry orders and ensure things get done when he's not there. He knows this from his experience as a gang boss, even if he might actually be wrong. Even a tyrant has generals and officials.
I guess dark is up to the reader. I'm not pushing for darker, I just felt like Haftling's little last paragraph was maybe just a touch more twisted than things had been yet. Maybe it was the dancing corpse of her nemesis that she'd finally killed snapping its leg while she shivered on the floor confused and scared that she was enjoying being raped and adding to the madness. And in the back of her mind, she's still thinking about her family throughout this experience. But we don't get to see inside her head much, so maybe not. Okay, writing that out makes it read kind of weird. Wow. I'm actually sorry if you're still reading this story. WTF is happening here?
7746018 7746055 7746098 7746157 7746175 7746181 Holy shit man. I can't respond to all of these! But I did read them! Thanks for the encouragement, and glad to hear your thoughts. I always like reading your fucked up stories!
The stasis thing is actually almost stolen from a really bizarre story I read on literotica. It had a OP guy who could trap time in little loops, and kept people as pieces of erotic art. It was poorly written, but I couldn't stop reading it because the concept was both novel and incredibly entertaining. I really want to write a pony version of it at some point, but I don't remember what the story was or how to find it again, and I don't want to straight rip the premise without linking the story. So I've got this little thing here as sort of an homage to it. He'll hit more ponies with it, guarantee. Some of them will be more and less cruel than what happened to Morgentau, and Morgentau might not stay like that forever. We'll see.
It's also interesting to see what you like and don't like about it. I was kind of surprised actually!
I'd love to see Morgentau used as target practice for facials, especially with her frozen-open eyes, so that the first thing that happens when she 'wakes' is that she blinks stinging, burning jizz from her eyes and gags on salty, soapy jizz...
I thought the spit-play in this chapter was the perfect amount of degrading without going into 'blehh' territory - usually that point for me is when the amount of spit figuratively outweighs the degradation it enacts on the victim, and it becomes more about the spit than the humiliation of it. The 'guided blowjob' was great, I love his harassment of the widow, and licking up cum-vomit is one of my major fetish buttons - if you gave that bit some detail in the next chapter, well, I wouldn't complain.
Probably my fave chapter so far, tho that might be because of the relative lack of murder.
He left two of the city's best wizards to their own devices for an hour with the intention of having them find non-crippled victims, and they STILL couldn't figure out how to remove his magic from them and flee the city?
7746044
Ehh... He's just early in his power curve right now. Eventually he'll figure out his limits and decide/discover exactly how powerful/immortal he may or may not be. But for the moment, he feels like he's on top of the world and he's gonna bring it crashing down. His power isn't something others have, at least not yet. He'll get into that soon.
Short spoiler, it's usually an earth pony only thing, and without ridiculous studying, it's not very useful. Also, earth ponies have been doing it for ages, unconsciously usually. Things like pawing at the dirt near their farm. It usually requires earth pony hooves, which is why he needs to use his hooves for permanent runes. There may have been a few who figured it out, but they never thought to summon a demon with it. Which is sort of what happened. Instead of a demonic possession, he got a Sombranic possession. The possession/gift allows him to use Sombra's magic to "cheat" and make temporary runes very rapidly. This is how he fucks up unicorn magic and creates runes that aren't on surfaces. On top of that, he's got Sombras unicorn magic and an enhanced earth pony build. He's nasty, and nobody knows how to deal with him yet, but he's gonna get his shit pushed if he goes head to head with a real Apotheosis. Even an earth pony who knows just enough to disrupt magic and fuck up his runes could be a problem if he was caught unaware.
But he hasn't figured out too much of this yet. He's just having fun killing ponies and making a mess right now. Maybe that has something to with being possessed by an evil tyrant? Or maybe that's just the kind of asshole he is! Yay!
The Power base is because he doesn't feel like he can control the entire country by himself. He's gonna need ponies to carry orders and ensure things get done when he's not there. He knows this from his experience as a gang boss, even if he might actually be wrong. Even a tyrant has generals and officials.
I guess dark is up to the reader. I'm not pushing for darker, I just felt like Haftling's little last paragraph was maybe just a touch more twisted than things had been yet. Maybe it was the dancing corpse of her nemesis that she'd finally killed snapping its leg while she shivered on the floor confused and scared that she was enjoying being raped and adding to the madness. And in the back of her mind, she's still thinking about her family throughout this experience. But we don't get to see inside her head much, so maybe not. Okay, writing that out makes it read kind of weird. Wow. I'm actually sorry if you're still reading this story. WTF is happening here?
7746018
7746055
7746098
7746157
7746175
7746181
Holy shit man. I can't respond to all of these! But I did read them! Thanks for the encouragement, and glad to hear your thoughts. I always like reading your fucked up stories!
The stasis thing is actually almost stolen from a really bizarre story I read on literotica. It had a OP guy who could trap time in little loops, and kept people as pieces of erotic art. It was poorly written, but I couldn't stop reading it because the concept was both novel and incredibly entertaining. I really want to write a pony version of it at some point, but I don't remember what the story was or how to find it again, and I don't want to straight rip the premise without linking the story. So I've got this little thing here as sort of an homage to it. He'll hit more ponies with it, guarantee. Some of them will be more and less cruel than what happened to Morgentau, and Morgentau might not stay like that forever. We'll see.
It's also interesting to see what you like and don't like about it. I was kind of surprised actually!
7746919
I don't know why your still reading it. I'm not! I'm just writing it. It's a mystery!
7747176
I'd love to see Morgentau used as target practice for facials, especially with her frozen-open eyes, so that the first thing that happens when she 'wakes' is that she blinks stinging, burning jizz from her eyes and gags on salty, soapy jizz...
I thought the spit-play in this chapter was the perfect amount of degrading without going into 'blehh' territory - usually that point for me is when the amount of spit figuratively outweighs the degradation it enacts on the victim, and it becomes more about the spit than the humiliation of it. The 'guided blowjob' was great, I love his harassment of the widow, and licking up cum-vomit is one of my major fetish buttons - if you gave that bit some detail in the next chapter, well, I wouldn't complain.
Probably my fave chapter so far, tho that might be because of the relative lack of murder.
He left two of the city's best wizards to their own devices for an hour with the intention of having them find non-crippled victims, and they STILL couldn't figure out how to remove his magic from them and flee the city?