Dragonfire, a confident mercenary mare, takes her wasteland life as it comes. Little does she know that she is more special than she had realised—so much so that somepony lurking in the shadows has been waiting for her for a long time.
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This has me curious, will the foal be a filly or a Colt...?
9357114 Only time can tell.
Politics, gotta love politics in your FoE stories! They could at least have thrown a good home for the foal into the deal as well, promissing a babysitter bot or something!
Nitpicks:
" But I'm not one for taking my anger out on an expectant mare" expecting
Thoughts should be in present tense once again.
"Even if I'd instead she keep hold of the stone tablet we'd found in the labs when she'd asked about it." Insisted?
" the likes of which I held onto with from hooves." front, or fore
" I could just say here with her forever" stay