Not that big a comment on this one as I snug away at work to read like 95% of it on my phone, and phones and writing comments dosn't mix.

One thing that hit me mid chapter is that I have yet another "proof" on my parasite theory, that magical burnout is lasting for quite a while, almost as if something was eating up magic and growing bigger and bigger... Time will tell if my theory is correct or not in the next chapter when Dragonfire tries to get it back, no matter how long a nap she gotta take!

Ohh and also, where the buck did that intro piece with the zebra come from! Plot are happening!