No..... No, no ,NO! WARP TAKE YOU DAINN!

Now I am pissed turns to black Templar brothers go forth brothers perch the Caribou from existence avenge celestia

I do not know if I can keep reading this now that you killed Celestia

7760008 *finger tap, finger tap, finger tap* Mmmm... There is more to this, don't end your interest here. But, I won't make you do anything, it is your choice.

7760011 as long as Celestia is rebuilt as a super powered cyborg ninja princess I'm good

Oh... my fucking gawd...
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Yep, there is no mercy for Diann... there will be no mercy at all. None in the slightest...
Fucking hell bravo...

7760014 Eheh... Didn't think I'd go that far, did ya? :D

YOU DID NOT JUST KILL CELESTIA DID YOU, YOU BETTER NOT HAVE!

7760022 *BIG OL' CHESHIRE GRIN*

7760022 we can always use the living metal the necrons are made of and rebuild her as a cyborg ninja princess

7760029 New lore says the process is either loss or had been destroyed.

7760032 frat oh well was worth a shot, please don't let tia be dead

7760026 SHE IS YOUR DAUGHTER, HOW COULD YOU...........Wait a minute she is an Alicorn, aren't they Immortal after all, wouldn't she be "dead" for a short period of time before her inborn Alicorn magic just revive her, after all it's INSIDE her and not part of her horn style of magic that she normally uses.

Well, shit just decided to take a holiday and let genocide hit the fan

7760037 Alicorns, from what I understand, are long lived, not immortal.

7760026 BURN HIM!!!!!!

First when I read the title, my eyeball and brain (That I dont have) were like, "Alright, let's analyse!" so, here Is was I saw;

Chapter Nine
A Father's Faliure

And this is what was highlighted;

Chapter Nine
A Father's Faliure

Then I got to thinking, Faliure = bad shit is gonna happen, so that means one of the few are either gonna die, or will betray. Luna, Celestia or Daring. I ruled out Daring because it said, and I quote, "A FATHER'S Faliure" So, I used typicalism (if that is even a word XD.) and guessed either Darings lover- I MEAN, Ay’therian, would fail in saving Luna, rage and save Celestia, good would win, happy days and His wedding with Daring would ensure- I MEAN everything would be cool.

OR, Ay’therian would succeed in rescuing Luna, but fail in rescuing Celestia and this 'King' would kill her in a very violent way in which included blood going everywhere.

SO, I kept reading and I got to this bit;

“Are the two of you alright?”

"Father!” Luna yelled, quickly hugging Ay’therian

And my brain got to highlighting these words;

“Are the two of you alright?”

"Father!” Luna yelled, quickly hugging Ay’therian

And thats when imagination got ahold of me- Which, by the way, is very scary. Run for your lives.

LUNA, called, "Daddy" meaning that it was either my latter option, or they were actually gonna save Tia.

But because I know how you are Knighty, and due to the title, I guessed the latter XD

And then... This... Ruined my mood...

The mare had a look of terrified confusion that became burned into Ay’therian’s memory, permanently. “D-Daddy?”

All sound became nonexistent, not even the screams were heard by the Phaeron, as he watched Celestia’s flesh tear like thin fabric. Her four limbs went in different directions, blood spraying on to Ay’therian’s chest and faceplate, causing him to fall to his knees… As his eldest daughter’s body dropped in front of the Phaeron.

“CELESTIA!!!!!” Ay’therian’s agonizing cry was followed by a negative pulse of red energy.

And... I cried, so, FREAKING HARD! Like, I know Tia isnt my favourite Princess, but the feels dude! Seriously! Like, I cried, and died on the inside reading that little bit!

Good chapter though, potato approves 100% always XD

Diann, You can burn in hell!!!

7760047 ...... I feel honored with that much of attention to details.... Also? You know I'm your major fix for the feels drug, ADMIT IT! I'M YOUR DEALER FOR IT!

7760036 what we need is some good ol emotional unatachment and a deus ex machina

Wait a minute... Necron have power of death itself, why not Ay'therian use that power to being celestia back to life? (Long with cadence too?)

7760053 I WILL NEVER ADMIT IT!!! NEVER!!!

I pay attention, always. But shit, I must have actually been listening to my English classessss-- snake snake snake snake snake snake snake snake snake...

And believe it or not, you're one of two writers that actually make me cry even time I remember a scene in your stories. Like, I swear I can't remember much or else amma start crying. XD

7760064 They retconnted that. They can only do it with their own kind now, no other race can receive the Necron's gift.

7760071 Two characters: Snowdrop and Kurzatharion.

7760016
You have earned your title of Black Knight...
*Hugs Celly plushie and cries salty tears of sadness*

7760077 NO- NO! Stay away with your God damn feels!

...

Damnit...

Y'know, I was re-reding that the other day, and I realised how sad that story would be, I mean, it could be sad, but happy, but knowing you, you'd make is sad, happy AND gory XD

Now excuse me while I go off and find a tub of mint and chocolate ice cream, and a pillow XD

7760084 Ooooooh, you know me... And imagine Kurza finally getting his wish of seeing Snowdrop again, after he did something down the road.
7760083 Now you know not to tempt my hand, unlike some people.

7760085 I DO pay enough attention Knighty, I promise its not just the drugs for the feels Bro

7760083 I KNEW I WASN'T THE ONLY ONE!

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If you all will excuse me, I gotta go reload the feels cannon, annnnnnnnnnd deal with a crying Galaxia................... Where's Katharine, when I need her?

7760072 but celestia is his daughter, so he will do everything in his power to get her back. Even he ask one the C'tan shard (we don't know who or what it is?) to being his daughter.

Will you do a same with your daughter?

7760085
*Sobs loudly* I'm telling Pinkie on you!
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QUICK! SOMEONE SABOTAGE HIS FEELS CANNON!

7760098 What are you talking about? Besides, you filled my rage on the Caribous. I want to kill them all! Death to King Diann!

7760113 I gave you feels. Not the sad feels, but angry feels. Feels are still feels.

Dont tell my Grand Father is coming in hot and heavy and is Realy T off right now

7760098 Galaxia is soooo sweet XD...

Until she starts to cry

7760104 SHHHH... amma on it

7760122 True. You said there will be more to this. I don't want Tia to be dead, but I want the death of King Diann to be as painful as possible!!!

7760008 Celestia is not dead yet. Alicorns are a pain in the ass to kill, she's just been disabled for the forseeable future until she can be either healed or regenerate.

7760054 that would work but I still feel is rebuilding her as a cyborg ninja princess would be better

7760138 then why am I getting a vibe that she is dead dead dead dead dead.

All sound became nonexistent, not even the screams were heard by the Phaeron, as he watched Celestia’s flesh tear like thin fabric. Her four limbs went in different directions, blood spraying on to Ay’therian’s chest and faceplate, causing him to fall to his knees… As his eldest daughter’s body dropped in front of the Phaeron.

One of them started with red portals opening across Canterlot’s streets, followed by the bone chilling wails of rampaging Flayed Ones. Without Ay’therian’s control, there was nothing to stop these cursed Necrons from going wild on the living… And they were attracted by the scent of blood, sensing the living that remained within Canterlot, many being guarded by their disoriented kin.
The second occurrence happened on Luna’s moon. Fissures cracked open into deep canyons, causing the surface to split and force apart wide. Hundreds of red lights appearing within the fissure… A massive, moon crescent, warship tearing through and headed towards Equis, specifically Equestria.

Well.....
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but still i'm hoping for good/happy end

7760153 We'll see next chapter. but I'm placing my thoughts on Celestia Surviving on a limb with serious repercussions in the immediate future.

7760193 that's one way of seeing it but I'm pretty sure when someone is drawn and quartered that they usually die from losing all the blood out of where their arms and legs used to be

Holy fuck that was brutal.

Hopefully there will be a happy ending and they can save Celestia.

7760200 We'll have to see what happens next chapter.

First Cadance, now Celestia!?
How much do you want Eques/Equestria to blown up/burnt to a crisp? (respectively)

7760098 An here we thought that our comment had been completely bypassed
In all honesty, I should have seen the death of one of the sisters from the get go, but After re-reading the chapter several times and drowning my sorrow in blue powerade, I can't believe that it was Celly instead of Luna... you better peel Dainn like a banana if you get my drift

I rate this 4/5 because of a dead Celestia

Your posts remind me of an ominous voice in the background that is speaking into our minds... that or the Deku Tree if he wrote dark FanFiction

Edit: forgot the most important part...

BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!

7760012 they do have the technology

7760491 the ponies don't but the neurons do

7760140 sota like img14.deviantart.net/6150/i/2011/180/d/b/cyborg_ninja_wizard_luna_by_infernaldalek-d3kglk2.jpg or derpicdn.net/img/2013/8/17/402855/full.png ? but more queenie-but-only-in-status-not-in-title-of-the-unnaturally-colored-p0nies-i-mean-have-you-even-seen-some-of-the-color-combinations-here-it's-just-ridiculous-i-mean-come-on-hasbro-what-is-with-you-of-the-sun?

7760745 yeah like that but more necrony