So, Dusk was a stallion but is now a human? In a world of unpredictable (and mostly horny) Monster Girls? This looks interesting. Updates will be sporadic? I can deal with that. I can't wait to see what the other monsters the girls are now. Plus, his 'friendship (with benefits) letters to Celestia can be quite...entertaining to say the least.
I have a feeling of what the rest of the girls will be. Although I am a little surprised that Pinkie was a slime. Kinda thought she would be a lamia. but I can't wait for the rest of this story to unfold
There were a lot fewer errors than I'd expected, though I don't see why you can't transfer this to a proper computer to fix the errors. That said, this was a cute little story that sets up just enough of the plot to keep the audience interested.
Great make more chapters
So, Dusk was a stallion but is now a human? In a world of unpredictable (and mostly horny) Monster Girls? This looks interesting. Updates will be sporadic? I can deal with that. I can't wait to see what the other monsters the girls are now. Plus, his 'friendship (with benefits) letters to Celestia can be quite...entertaining to say the least.
I have a feeling of what the rest of the girls will be. Although I am a little surprised that Pinkie was a slime. Kinda thought she would be a lamia. but I can't wait for the rest of this story to unfold
This seems promising!
There were a lot fewer errors than I'd expected, though I don't see why you can't transfer this to a proper computer to fix the errors. That said, this was a cute little story that sets up just enough of the plot to keep the audience interested.
Well, considering that Pink Slimes are described to be "in a state of permanent heat", this does not suprise me at least. Onwards!