Starting up the second chapter, and I know I'll need to edit a bit. I'll edit my comment with the changes later though, ok?

It was a pretty good chapter, though in need of a lot of edits. Other than a few things though, you did really well here.

This wouldn't end well.

Oh, but it already has!

She looked past her milky mammaries to see the tapering lavender tumescence pushing past her introitus, the corona completely lost in her carnal depths

...Her what???

Noice