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This is entertaining, Keep going.
Nice artwork, very fitting. And so far this story is interesting, keep going.
You know reading this chapter I just can't help but think of Team Four Star's Abridged Vegeta scream of Fury
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Your grammar and spelling can be a bit annoying but it's a good start.
7873657 yep that's the one right there
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If it's annoying you, can you point out where? I don't want to annoy people too much with bad grammar.
7874821 if you read often you can learn to correct your mistakes more easily.
The more you learn from finding your own mistakes, review a bit more and you'll see the difference it makes.
Ps sorry if I seem like an ass hole...
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Oh, trust me, I read plenty. I'm not trying to make this seem like a genuine novel, I'm just trying to have fun writing it. I'm just asking if you can point out anything specific that bothers you, because it might bother other people as well and I would like to fix anything that might be wrong. One person can't perfectly edit their work all the time, so that's why I like to ask others about what bothers them about my work so that I can catch anything I missed.
Also, if you really want to talk about spelling and grammar. Asshole is one word, not two, and you bringing up your complaints in a reasonable and informative comment so that I may improve does not make you either.
7875559 auto-correct is a bitch...
7875545 if only more people gave criticism like you.