Page generated in 0.024 seconds
Total duration
768 users online
714,904 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Good job I hope you get to feeling better
8104016
That was actually a long while ago. I'm already better. I just wrote out that specific part while I was still feeling the feels. Thank you though! And thanks for liking the stuff I write!
This chapter was good becuse it described the problems someone that goes fram a active warzone to a peaceful existence have to live in. In the begining everything is nice and happy, you relax, and then your mind and soul try to fix itself and collapses from what you have done, and what they did to you. Most Irak veterans after the conflict that was involved in the active fighting developed Ptsd and needed cunseling/terrapy to funktion in civilian settings. And then we got Bel, Ptsd x 1000.
It happens to me as well.
It hurts
It really does
That's all of it that I can put into words.
So I don't blame you
8104689
8104068
I do the same thing. I just keep my feelz on lockdown till they get dang near explosive, then when they do come out, like, two years later, I just bawl like a baby for half an hour. So I know how you feelz m8!
8104771
8104689
Thank you both.
8104842 xP
8104776 no prob! Us bros gotta look aout for each oher, amiright?
P.s. is that a picture of Remnant's moon off of the show RWBY?
8104863
Indeed it is good sir. Indeed it is.
8104879 The story reminds me of the picture of Luna standing looking up at a broken moon.
8104881
Cool.
I really like your story so far. I am in Chapter 9 and hey nice re from the events out season 1 :D
And I fucking LOVE dragons I will be on track and read Chapter 10 if I get some time.
Good job and its fine to see that your story has not one totally new OP char which is invincible, he knows pain and his skills are not different from Alicorn magic.
I am interested in what the "fear" magic means his healing ability how does he get power from that? Can he absorb fear from Fluttershy or Trixie to make himself stronger?
or is it just for his fear to die that lets him carry on?
I like your sense of humor could it be that you like Trixie?
your "author" box is not crazy its pretty funny to read :D
I wish you best luck for your story
8104886 i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/001/209/407/5a4.jpg
8104925
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoy reading my story.
As for the fear power... hmmm... I'm trying to remember what I have said about it and what I haven't...
Okay, so, yes, it has been mentioned that he can absorb fear (Chapter 10. not surprised you didn't catch that), but the power it gives isn't as much as you'd think. The power of the fear comes from the understanding of what fear is, and what it means to the individual. Other than that, I can't tell you much else without spoiling too many things.
And I just like the idea of Trixie being the element of Sarcasm, if that were a thing. It sounds funny to me.
And thank you very much for telling me that you enjoy the AN sections. I'm glad they're funny to some people.
And as for Baelor not being OP... heh heh, we'll see... this story is going to mainly focus on healing the scars from the moon, for both Bael and Luna.
After that though.... Ohohohohohohohohohoo yes, things are going to get turned up pretty quickly. And not just for Bael either. And if you're wondering what I mean by that... Let's just say that Celestia isn't going to be quite as helpless as in the show... nor are her little ponies.
8104976
Holy Sh#$ that's badass!
8104985 I know right? Thats what it reminded me of.
Man this is amazing if you ever need anyone to talk about anything with you can message me and I'll get to it as soon as possible.
8104879 *le gasp* and I been on a RWBY fanfic binge for the past couple weeks!!!!
8104981
I was still on chapter 9 ^^ well I needed to stop reading yesterday because I was out of time I was going to read it today
Thanks that you answer me
I hate writing on a german mobile phone useless auto correct in german, does not help if you are bad in english xD well I will write again after I read chapter 10 :D
It always frustrates me when I see that in stories, I just can't understand how saying something out loud and then crying about it is supposed to, in any way, help. I mean, if it's a big deal to you you are already thinking about it, saying it out loud does nothing but garner sympathy. I just find sympathy annoying, I'd much rather just get on with my life. If someone was pressuring me to talk like that they would probably just get an angry retort.
8143585
It almost sounds like you think sympathy is a bad thing. If you don't like people sympathizing you, that's fine, and that's how you decide you don't like to be treated. But you should also try to understand that different people are different, and that not everyone can be emotionally rock-solid. Life can get stressful, and not all of us can handle that stress without support.
And as for Baelor, before you judge him. Think about this. He was stuck, on the moon, with someone that wants to kill him, for one thousand years.
I know it's simple to just say that, but for us mortals, a single year is still something we struggle to get through day by day. Not only does Baelor have to struggle through a thousand of them, but every waking moment, every second he's conscious, is an instant where one wrong move, one miscalculation, could result in him getting killed... and then not dying, but having to endure the pain of death extended over the course of whatever amount of time is needed for his element to heal him.
I don't know about you, but that sounds pretty damn stressful to me, and unlike me or you, he couldn't afford to allow himself to become vulnerable enough to cry or relieve the stress during those thousand years.
So, when someone comes along wanting to help him and hear his problems, it makes sense to me that he would want to let some of that pain out.
8144551 I didn't mean to disparage what he has been through, or his pain. I just don't see the benefit of spewing all of it out at other people. Sure I guess it might feel nice to know you have other people who know what you have been through, but how does that help? What's the point? Why is it that stories act as if its not only helpful but so helpful that the person in pain needs to be pressured into telling them the details?
Edit: it's the pressuring that gives me the most consternation.
8145038
Maybe this will help you understand a little better. People are composed of three main parts. The body, the mind, and the soul. And each of them can be damaged and harmed. What Bael went through was damaging to all three to varying degrees.
Baelor's body has healed for the most part, with the overall energy in his core still recharging a bit. His mind, for the most part, is still overall intact and isn't something to be fairly worried about.
Baler's spirit though (his emotional state) is still in tatters. All that emotional trauma built up, and due to having to stay alive on the moon and fight constantly, he couldn't focus on anything else. The pressure needed to be relieved, so he spewed out his thoughts to the first ones to ask and show concern for him about it.
Baelor needs to heal his spirit. And to do that, he needs to forgive, and know he's forgiven. He needs to forgive Luna, forgive himself, and Luna needs to do the same. This was just the first step in the story to that ending.
(Edit: To be fair, if Bael had decided to just walk out the door to go on his run through the rain, the others would have dropped it. It was a fork in the metaphorical road, with each one leading somewhere else.)
Dear Falx,
Hey its me 'not' Austin. I know I am a little late to the "party" but I will say I am loving this story. I also completely understand where you are coming from with a Biannual Breakdown. I bet you we are not the only ones even in this fandom that has them. I know you said that your emotions "bled" into your work, but isn't that what authors are supposed to do to some extent? And I also think it fit very well with the story, no sane person comes back from being imprisoned for a thousand years and forced to fight your only friend who is being controlled, and is perfectly mentally and emotionally sound. Also ,shameless plug here, would you mind giving a book of mine a read and telling me how you think it looks so far? It is in no way perfect I know, and is in fact being written by two authors who have differing views on it, me and a frind of mine. It is called Lost in Unified Madness.
Sincerely,
Not Austin. 😜
Ps I dont actually usually write these comments like this, I just felt it appropriate for some reason.
8691819
Dear Thunder,
I was wondering if you could help me with finding an answer to a question that's been plaguing me. People that read my story seem to think I'm a professional critic or something, or that I'm automatically their friend that will help them out with whatever they ask, when in fact, I have no clue who the #@%$ they are. I'm honestly not sure whether this is because I just seem approachable, or whether they just don't know where else to go on FimFiction to get answers for things.
I would also like to point out that this is actually a serious question I'm having. I am not trying to be an asshole and point you out exclusively, there are several people that have sought me out seeking writing advice before. I'm not sure why. I just write for fun, and happen to have taken all my college level writing courses, so I know a few rules that need to be followed is all. I'm not planning on making this into a profession, and in all honesty, I don't mind helping people out. But I'm confused why people just seem to automatically assume without talking to me at all, that I'm the one they should ask.
Sincerely
Falx_of_Lume
PS: Thanks for the words of comfort. They would have been greatly appreciated a half a year ago.
PPS: I seriously have no clue who you are. I don't know any Austins.
Equestrian doctors. Risking ponies lives for science since the beginning of equestria
i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/602/354/526.jpg
Hop aboard. No stop. Never stop.
I’m curious to how things would have gone if he went to Canterlot. Yes I am disappointed he stayed in Ponyville. There are to many stories of the main characters staying there
But it’s your story