Not bad, certainly has my attention. My one complaint is the Doom Slayer being, well... compliant. Specifically with the whole "give us your weapons and wait here, please." If he talked I figured his response would be like.
"No, and fuck you."
"Please, its only to ease the fears of our people around you."
"That's their problem, not mine. Tell them to either grow a damn backbone or fuck off."
7975512 No, Doomguy's other nickname, given to him by the demons, is "the Doom Slayer" as explained thoughout the slayer's testaments, which is the demons saying "We had a sentinel betray his people to bring back his dead son, but the son was turned into a demon. Now he is pissed off and almost 3/4 of us are dead from him, we screwed ourselves." That's basicly it. 8077892 Now to be fair, he actually WILL do this since 1. They have a common enemy, 2. In order to make sure they can trust one another, he needed to so such a thing, and 3. Because fuck you that's why.
......slayer.....is this buffy?
Noooo!!!
The cliffhanger of doom caught me
I want more!!!
7975512 In DOOM the demons refer to him as The Doom Slayer or Slayer
More!!! This is really good!!!! XD
As long as this isnt one of those stories that is only updated every few months and never gets finished, ill give it a follow :)
True One: Why there is such an empty space beyond the last sentence? Otherwise, It's a DooM fic, I will keep my watch on it.
I am looking forward to the next chapter, this one was great!!
8009987 Expect a possible few Monty Python refs
7979842 It's funny I didn't notice that until recently. I'm gonna see if my other stuff has the same problems.
Not bad, certainly has my attention. My one complaint is the Doom Slayer being, well... compliant. Specifically with the whole "give us your weapons and wait here, please." If he talked I figured his response would be like.
"No, and fuck you."
"Please, its only to ease the fears of our people around you."
"That's their problem, not mine. Tell them to either grow a damn backbone or fuck off."
More my friend, this was very wel done
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No, Doomguy's other nickname, given to him by the demons, is "the Doom Slayer" as explained thoughout the slayer's testaments, which is the demons saying "We had a sentinel betray his people to bring back his dead son, but the son was turned into a demon. Now he is pissed off and almost 3/4 of us are dead from him, we screwed ourselves."
That's basicly it.
8077892
Now to be fair, he actually WILL do this since 1. They have a common enemy, 2. In order to make sure they can trust one another, he needed to so such a thing, and 3. Because fuck you that's why.