I'm interested to see where this goes. I mean Nightmare might be cruel in this, but she also made clear that she in a way wants to be loved and not have some broken toys. Maybe an effect of the Elements? Or she really has the desire to be loved, considering jealousy really was her downfall it is a possibility.
In any case I'm already excited for the next chapter!
Holy shit.
I like where this is going.
Interesting...
Your prose is very awkward and stutter-y. If that isn't something you can fix on your own, I suggest finding an editor to help.
So what happens in the next chapter now?
7627535 More one on one time with each is the plan next.
7627541 ok.
Ugh, Nightmare forces? No thank you.
I'd like to see where this goes...
I'm interested to see where this goes. I mean Nightmare might be cruel in this, but she also made clear that she in a way wants to be loved and not have some broken toys. Maybe an effect of the Elements? Or she really has the desire to be loved, considering jealousy really was her downfall it is a possibility.
In any case I'm already excited for the next chapter!
Nightmare Moon: Will you serve?
Fluttershy:I-I w-will s-serve.