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Holy shit.
I like where this is going.
Interesting...
Your prose is very awkward and stutter-y. If that isn't something you can fix on your own, I suggest finding an editor to help.
So what happens in the next chapter now?
7627535 More one on one time with each is the plan next.
7627541 ok.
Ugh, Nightmare forces? No thank you.
I'd like to see where this goes...
I'm interested to see where this goes. I mean Nightmare might be cruel in this, but she also made clear that she in a way wants to be loved and not have some broken toys. Maybe an effect of the Elements? Or she really has the desire to be loved, considering jealousy really was her downfall it is a possibility.
In any case I'm already excited for the next chapter!
Nice chapter! I am interested to see how the other two will fare!
Interesting piece so far. :) can't raid to read nightmare x rarity and nightmare x twi
Yay an update.
Well I wasn't expecting this, but this story inspired, well this:
Yeah, I don't know why this story brought that on, but it did. It's not enough to make it my own story, and only makes sense in the context of yours so...*shrug*
enjoy I guess.
I think you mean informal, not formal. Formal attire is higher-class clothing such as suits, ties, tuxedos, longer dresses, slacks, etc. The skirt fits, but I doubt a simple purple shirt would.
beautiful...loving every moment of this
Now I'm already excited to see the next one with Rainbow. Let's be honest, that one screams for a gangrape! I at least hope that will be the chapter where it occurs!
Very good...
7715596 I will spoil and say no, but also remind that the measures taken for each will only be more extreme, in one way or another, as time goes on.
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Ah okay. My second bet would be tentacles. At least I hope for it since she was dragged off by them!
so far i'm really liking this story
christmas? pretty sure mlp has hearth's warming. or maybe this AU just doesn't give a damn and goes with real world names for holidays instead of pony ones
7745092 Nope! That's just me legitimately fucking up.
Aww, I was hoping for tentacle action. Well, maybe next time? I'm also hoping that Rainbow will learn to enjoy it. I mean, her screaming out only in pain instead of pleasure isn't as interesting. But that's only my opinion.
Given it's September it's rather old but can I ask if this has hopes of being continued?
8416106 Unfortunately no, but I'm bad about putting things on hiatus.
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Hiatus suggests it will be continued, just in the far, far future...right?
8416707 Sorry. Cancelled was the correct word for that. Unfortunately, I'm trying to focus more on my original works and commissions at this point as far as my writing goes, and this idea is too old for me to want to risk allowing it to be commissioned again. I'm sorry.
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Ah no worries. Author's choice. Good luck with all the other works you're doing!
8420085 Thank you!
Nightmare Moon: Will you serve?
Fluttershy:I-I w-will s-serve.
First. Are you saying Nightmare Moon is a Shade?
Second. Rarity is Nightmare's apprentice?
Nightmare Rarity! Of course!
Also please take off the cancelled list