A young man is gifted with a better life... Yet, he suffers for it.
Clop great!
Twilight took it and read over it. She said that the Pincesses
pincesses?Great work do.
Good job
Wut. OK. Good. Bye. Why are you still reading this? I don't know
I like it, and I was wondering shouldn't our hero start to experience protein deficiency?
7806117 shhh... It's coming.
7806188 counting on ya
That escalated quickly.
7823611 Woah. Great minds think alike, am I right?
HURRAY i was wondering if there was clop in this story its a good story but if it didnt have clop id be less motivated to read the rest
I still reckon Adolf Nightler is better...
You're a poop butt for making that joke, but you're a decent poop butt
It feels like this chapter dumped too much at once. You introduced too many new variables way too fast.
A bit too fast paced and too much dumped into the chapters and kinda rushed into the clop. You should dial it back a bit.
Clop great!
pincesses?
Great work do.
Good job
Wut. OK. Good. Bye. Why are you still reading this? I don't know
I like it, and I was wondering shouldn't our hero start to experience protein deficiency?
7806117 shhh... It's coming.
7806188 counting on ya
That escalated quickly.
7823611 Woah. Great minds think alike, am I right?
HURRAY i was wondering if there was clop in this story its a good story but if it didnt have clop id be less motivated to read the rest
You're a poop butt for making that joke, but you're a decent poop butt
It feels like this chapter dumped too much at once. You introduced too many new variables way too fast.
A bit too fast paced and too much dumped into the chapters and kinda rushed into the clop. You should dial it back a bit.