By day, a History Professor. By night, a master thief that steals what many believed can never be stolen. Spike Lupin is the Elusive master thief Dragon
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Very nice. Can't wait to see what's next.
Street justice you mean?
KO awesome chapter, next is Cadence's origin of how Spike Convinced her to join the Dragon gang and later on that Twilight and her friends will find out about Spike's identity and join as they see the true reason of Dragon! This a getting getting!
Justice is serve.
Very well done sir keep it up.
2 things:
1/ Luna's being highly hypocritical at the moment...She's experience her first sexual experiences by discreetly seeing Spike plowing Celestia (though 'making love' is the better term considering that it's obvious Spike loves Tia), yet she's lumping in the guy that's actually trying to break her out of jail with other guys that are in it for the pussy...Sure it's easy to think that, but at least give the man a chance first before rejecting him. Spike's already shown that Tia means a lot to him other than the standard master/servant relationship, but he's shown that his heart is more than enough to share.
2/ How in the hell does being accused of theft have her in the lurch for a possible life sentence?? That doesn't make sense to me--unless there a 'three strikes and you're out' law where if the accused is charged with three separate felonies, he/she's locked up for life. Not to mention, it really seems like it's Luna's first offense--I can see maybe a few years, but not life imprisonment.
7849862 i think he just said for life to convince her, and she was panicking do much to realize it
7849902 Exactly, with the betrayal she just faced at the hands of her own boss and how he forcibly tried to throw himself at her would mess up any girl making them doubt all men.
Another terrific chapter. I especially like how you kept most of Luna's character intact. Keep it up.
7711196 ...Than why is there no crossover tag?
Okay What Anime is this based off of
8074008
That was a deep chapter I'm so happy he was there for her.