So cute

7572184 I was hoping someone would catch on to that and respond thx.

Am I the only person who thinks of how adorable that cover art is? It's so cute!

7573427 You are aren't; I posted it on Derpibooru and had to hand out metformin.

7573393 Said this one way back and no-one has clicked yet?

2nd to rock and roll with it. 'Wonder' if they meet up with Diana of Themisire?? I thought it might be Amorous Amarezons?

If I suggest her real home 'Themyscira' that might help.

7573433 What you said sounded weird to me oddly...

7573446 Metformin is a common drug used by Type2 Diabetics to manage absorption of sugar into their blood.

7573640 Oh! Well, now I know... Learn something new everyday

Well, Daring's next book is going to be... interesting

7573959 You can bet Dash isn't going to want to read it with Twilight.

Or maybe she will...

ACK THE COVER ART.

WHYYYYYYYY

Love the story though. You get on my tracking and loved

7574013 What's wrong with the cover art?

7574018
Nothing with the cover art.

I love it.

It's too cute for my feels. They're broken. :D

7574035 Ah. Well, we are working toward an end where they find themselves living that picture, not that there won't be a lot more fun along the way.

7574037 YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

Or as Pinkie would say, YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-
Three Hours Later
-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!

I got here from sofurry where this pic is posted. The adorableness if the art is just too much, gonna have to read the story now!

I'm more than okay with this.

I've read all four chapters and I like it. Let me give you some pointers. You are rushing, badly. The explicit content is fine, but when you get to the story, you rush it too much. I suggest you slow it down a bit, and think it through some. It lacks a bit of detail and gives off a scatterbrained effect. Good luck, I hope to see more.

Still a better and much, much less confusing love story than Twilight.
8.7/10 looking forward to more chapters

It's a good pairing, not because they're nemesis, but because their motivations will ensure competition that won't ever really spread to outright hatred.
Keep going! ;)

I kinda love how smooshy they are.

More smooshy please.

7573433 Can Daring turn back into a mare and have hot lesbian sex?