I like the art. Enhances the reading experience. Don't see why vavacung would withhold them in the first place.

The link to the "original version" doesn't work. It points to the updated version.

Spike, you big cheater; you used the the strategy guide!

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I'm kinda pissed about that because I can't afford to pay him 20 bucks a month. I'm barely getting by as it is.

But does the carpet match the drapes?

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... Agh! Nosebleed!!
Bub Im all serioubness... that'd be pretty hot

This needs a continuation, imo.

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Unlikely unless it gets commissioned again...

Chapter 1
How imainative?
And, what is it with the no-show images?
where is the promised illustrations?

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Right here.

“If only you could come back with me...” he said as the portal began to swallow him whole, “...Maybe I could ask you to be my special somepony, instead of Rari—”

Yeah, Spike should be with somepony close to his age .

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Yeah probably.

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“Wha— Who said that? Who are you? Where are you?” Mane-Iac twisted around, frantically searching as her mane tendrils writhed wildly. Finally, she [saw] him standing in front of the control switches for the cages. He stood over the unconscious body of one of her henchponies.

A wild typo appears! And pictures broken.

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Fixed ... and I’m just going to remove the images from the Fimfic version. The one with NSFW images will still have all the images.