On her way to the country of Stalliongrad for a meeting, Princess Celestia's helicopter is supposedly downed by a blizzard. Princess Luna must resume her sister's role as Equestria's leader, unknowing that a force larger than her is at play.
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I imagine meat would be meal.
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Nnoooo
Good chapter overall. Had to skim a bit when descriptors of ponies became dull and redundant, but I like how the thoughts are forming and plans unfolding.
I hate doing this because I'm scared I'll come across as rude, but you said to point out spelling/grammar mistakes, so....
Should be 'Twilight and Equestria might worry, but your sister won't.
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Well, this is the very first story I ever wrote, so yeah... there'll be some errors, lol.
Also, not at all. Thank you for spotting this. I... would go and fix what you found, but this story's so old and hardly gets the attention to warrant me actually fixing stuff.
Thank you for deciding to read it, though! I hope you end up enjoying it! You should totally comment as you read along.