On her way to the country of Stalliongrad for a meeting, Princess Celestia's helicopter is supposedly downed by a blizzard. Princess Luna must resume her sister's role as Equestria's leader, unknowing that a force larger than her is at play.
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I mean wow just wow.
This story was amazing , one of the best I have read. It's in the top 5 of my favorite ones by far.I loved how believable it was . Personal Thoughts coming in: I really didn't think the gore was "too much " at all , I felt like it was necessary to know what she went through.
I do have 2 problems with the story though. One is how easy Cloud was forgiven , I felt like he should have gotten a punch from Twilight when he said what happened to Celestia. The other one was how quickly Celestia forgave Luna . Maybe she should have had a flashback to when she saw Luna in the basement , and while she was freaking out I think the real Luna should have broke the flashback by hugging her and saying something heart felt.Those were my problems because those two things felt " too easy" and I felt like it didn't get enough explainion or emotion.
But besides that it was one of the best stories I have read in a long time.
Great job , keep it up!!!