When I was born, I knew nothing. And now here I am saving a world of ponies, as well as mine. Yay adventure.
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Dang, that was intense! Hate to get on Rin's bad side!
I'll still give this new version try, but I still wish you would had finish original series first. Do to the fact Jamri was not a push over from the first story.
7290361 Thanks for that, I promise not to disappoint. But I felt Jamir was tad overpowered too easy. Though in this version, it's no so much as him being overpowered, but there are limits to what he can do without causing serious injury to himself. Plus, he himself is about average in what he can do, but I am trying to balance out power for something more pratical, like being a tactician most of the time rather than a straight out fighter. May I ask what you think so far of the story? Anything in particular you like?