A Mass Effect crossover. A crew of salvagers discovers a damaged spacecraft with only one pony survivor. And the ponies want her back.
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If Scootaloo dies because she thought that chasing after that core is more important than calling Equestrian Navy for back up.
It would help with the flow better if you used scene breaks between scenes. It's jarring when the POV is on Scootaloo and then suddenly switches to the other crew and vice versa.