Short but good

Well, the punctuation and sentence structure, as well as a few instances of word choice, need some improvement, but overall, I think there's potential. After all, the right comma in the wrong place can make all the difference in a sentence.

Sorry, that was terrible. XD I'll see you up ahead.

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Yeah I'm only one guy with no real formal learning in the institution of literature so there's bound to be a couple spelling mistakes but I would like to let you know that I am re-evaluating most of the chapters in the story. I would also really like an editor...

Oh yes, he LOVES his job.

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I wonder who else is being released and are they going to be sent in the same or at least near vicinity location of the Corporal's?

*Sees green lambda and, U.S flag* You son of a bitch.....I'm in!!!

A lone enigmatic figure dressed in a gray-blue suit walks forward through the black endless void of time and space. With a briefcase firmly secured in his right hand, he moves at a steady and unhurried pace as he slowly approaches the only light visible in this vast emptiness, whilst his footsteps echo out into nothing for nobody to hear. Beneath this solitary light stands another man, a man that this individual in the suit has had dealings with before, a long time ago. The man beneath the light was facing away from him, his back turned as he stood there frozen. Feeling a rush of nostalgia wash over himself upon seeing the man beneath the light, the suited figure smiles, it had been a while since he had seen him, he would dare say he missed him.

G-man ?

“...but… as much as it pains me to say this, your abilities, skills, and mental aptitude, are no longer required. It would appear your able-bodied colleague Dr. Gordon Freeman proved to be an overly capable candidate and assistant in the fields of mass removal of… unwanted characters. Of course we, I... cannot let you interfere with future plans that me and my employers have set in motion. Therefore instead of keeping you around, they feel it is necessary to discard you. But, I'm not going to grant you the obvious removal method, which would be your termination. Despite what you may believe, I'm not that… cold hearted, unlike my employers,” The man adjusted his tie and his head slightly, before dusting his own suit off and talking once more after taking a deep, asthmatic breath.

Yep it’s G-man.