Following the events of the Black Mesa incident, Corporal Adrian Shephard was suspended in time by the G-Man, for later use. But the marine isn’t needed anymore thanks to Dr.Freeman surpassing G-Man’s expectations. So what to do with him now?
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Nice job! It's just a bit tricky to remember how the old version was, given how long it was since then
Okay I'm confused, I know some chapters were given edited changes, but what exactly happened with this chapter - was it heavily edited, or rewritten?
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Both technically. It still follows the same story structure, just some things have been changed. I gave it an overhaul.
Heh, I guess Kirin's never dealt with sea side warfare, so concept of marine forces or mariners is unfamiliar to them.
Hurah.
“we were not expecting any visitors this week!/.
Saw this error, figured yo point it out. Don't need an exclamation point or a dash there.
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Whoops, I got it. Thanks!
This story is nice, but will it continue at some point?