I might never get around to reading this, but +1 just for using a proper Latin title.

1850824 thanks actually it was thanks to someones help that the title was made proper before hand it was Luna Est Core Nocte. How id I get it so wrong? Oh well at least I tried.

Another good chapter, but there are a few grammar error here and there.

1850858
Egads! Well at least you got it sorted out. Luckily there are plenty of Latin nerds like me hanging around MLP fanfiction websites for whatever reason.

Eh, yeah, way too AU for my liking. Way too AU. Plus, Trixie being the protege in the first chapter just made it that much harder for me to try and read through. Best of luck in your writings.

1850876thanks as I stated in the author's not that will be fixed as well.

1850974 agreed and Google translate helps out a lot to.

cheers

I like this story (But I still have no idea what's going on)

1851486 sorry about the confusion.

1851495 It's more down to the fact that I'm easily distracted

1851589 Ah Okay

wow rainbow dash has dirty mind kikikikikikikikiki

LoL!! NEXT!!

1882685? maybe soon. but the scenes are just dragging out on me.

1890489 ah I guess I made it a bit more complicated than it should have been sorry about that however think colors and then think about the cutiemark stories for the main six and how they could have changed if rainbow dash didn't do the sonic Rainboom.

Seems like you made this story longer in detail than what most wanted it be.
A great story none the less but I suspect many did not want a long past to show up.

1974938 yia but the past is required for the reader to fully understand the history and why all of the changes had happened, also I hate plot holes. they just irk me beyond belief so sorry if this story is longer than expected.

The lilac mare reprimanded.

Erm. This is Fluttershy. Not Twi.

whimpering in fear for their lilac pony guardian

Again, Fluttershy is not lilac.

She called out to the lilac pegasus

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This is lilac.

The lilac pegasus warned

I guess you know where this is going...lilac
1974956 Well, I for one am very glad that you chose the scenic route for telling this story. I like to see what happened in a character's past and you make it interesting.
Now, Fluttershy plotting to get RD laid with her Timberwolves. Oook. Didn't see that coming, although I guess that she'll have good reasons(or maybe the "wanting them to get along" is enough reason for her).
Also, nice scene with the bandits, although it was close to being painful reading that bandit speak.

3041647 there all fixed, and the bandits are supposed to be painful, crude and just all around unpleasant. Basically they know there doing wrong and don't really care. So social rightness(and language) really just goes down the toilet there. Except when they wish to be understood in making demands from others.

1974938 and all those people are fucking idiots
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i know i get sad when a good book or tv series ends like seriously when MLP:FiM G4 ends for good im going to be devastated because the characters are memorable and i dont wont to see them go

just like this version of twilight its interesting i could actually see it happening heck i would watch it if it was animated