MAKE MORE PLEASE MAKE TWILIGTH AND LUNA PAIR THEY PASS SO WELL

Commas. They are friend, not foe.

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Oh there is Going to be more a lot more.

7212814 NICE WE THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME THEN

I dont really understand the Down votes its OK Not Shite

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Shinso is Twilight's Species or Race so to speak the Type of Vampony she is Tribe is Alicorn but takes place before she Awoken as an alicorn so she's still a unicorn Twilight's telling her story with some added comments and part's of key ponies in her life. Like Celestia and Luna might even have some PoV's from the rest of the main 6 should they are involved The story has 2 ways it can go Due to her Dual Gender.

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as for the Down Votes I have no clue This is only my second story I have worked on Neokiva may have written most of chapter One I do not at this moment have An Editor to work with this story I am looking Story was Proofread by Neokiva and I am currently working on chapter 2 Updates may take awhile depends on how focused I get and What happens in RL.

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I am looking for an Editor for the story as of right now it's only been proofread but not completely edited.

7219721 sorry mate, if I were you I'd hunt down one of those groups specifically for that. As for myself, my plate's loaded as it is.

7219721 you might find one with this link

Why the dislikes? I like this story it's got some promise.

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All I can say is the Haters are going to hate. That is my only guess as to why the downvotes. Not even sure if half of the Downvotes even truly read the story, anyway Chapter 2 is in the works

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No spoilers lol Shinso is Twilight's Species Alicorn is her Tribe in a since But dearing this story She is a Unicorn I will be going all the way up and a bit beyond her Awakening to being an Alicorn in this story also most of Season 5 happens not all of it still working how I'll tie in her ascension. Hope you Enjoy the story so far Chapter 2 is in the works.

I don’t want to hurt my friends and I didn’t want to impregnate them, so I was grateful. After revealing “my affliction” and explaining it to them, they said they would keep me informed at their monthly visits so this incident never repeated itself. Needless to say I was embarrassed at the lack of self control. I’m just glad Rainbow forgave me in the end.[i/]

You have a broken italics here so the rest of the chapter is in Italics.