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It's Dusk Shine, not Twilight Sparkle
Damn that is HOT, why did you have Sunset up and leave, why couldn't she just stay with Dusk and become one of his herd-mates, heck she could have been the Alpha Mare in it.
I'm confused. How is what happened to Philomena in any way Celestia's fault?
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If you read the Philomena Bonus, she sent Philomena to go check on Dusk
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.......And? How was she suppose to know that Dusk wasn't in control of himself? If I ask a friend to go down to the store for me and he gets mugged on the way, is that my fault? No, it isn't. Here, the fault is with the girls who interrupted the ritual.
Also, this chapter seems to act like Philomena didn't know about Demon Dusk before hand, while the bonus chapter itself implies the two did meet before. So which is it?
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Philomena got Celestia to stop Dusk.
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So Philomena knew about Demon Dusk before. Still want to know why it's Celestia's fault.
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She didn't count on being turned into an anthro phoenix and turned into a sex slave by Dusk part of Celestia's plan to check on Dusk.
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Okay, so I had to go and reread couple of chapters just to make sure and at no point was it ever stated or even hinted that Celestia actively planned on Philomena becoming Dusk's slave. If anything, this passage from two chapters ago plainly implies that Celestia didn't even know that Dusk lost control.
You are saying stuff that literally goes against what you wrote.
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Still doesn't mean she can't be accountable.
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How is she accountable? Philomena already knew about Demon Dusk and Celestia didn't know that Dusk had lost control, so she didn't send Philomena blindly into danger. Celestia didn't do anything wrong.
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Celestia had a feeling though. Also Philomena didn't know what was up with Dusk at the time. She thought that he was possessed by a demon back then.
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Then add that in the story. Because so far, we're lead to believe that Philomena already knew about Demon Dusk and Celestia had no clue that he broke free.
Is there a chance that even more mares might be added to his harem? Maybe for the rest of the main 6 or the royal sisters?
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Can't tell you who else is getting added. You'll have to wait and see what I come up with.
That was a awesome read and had a funny end it had me cracking up.
About the AN: Do you mean that the arc involving the villains, or this fic?
So... no conclusion on Fluttershy?
I happen to see two mistakes, one is when all are accounted for since Velvet is named once after Luna and a second time after Aria.
Second one is when she treathens the villainesses. She leaves but in the next sentence is still there.
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There aren't many clop stories I follow close enough to bother tracking, but what I've seen really leaves me hoping for more. Maybe a more romantic setting where Luna offers to join as the alpha (gotta know, what significance does that have here? Will there be something specific to incubus magic or just herds in general?), maybe a nice date with Philomena to take the edge off her intro and get closer. Maybe even an arc where the others of the mane 6 willingly offer to join and they each get a gentle and sweet romance scene as a contrast to the villainesses' night?
I KNEW IT! when i read the "quiet one" my first suspect is Fluttershy since we'll..... she's quiet