Twenty years after coming to Equestria, Silver Script has the opportunity to temporarily be human again. If only the circumstances that sent her to Sunset's human world allowed it to be a vacation.
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Well... fuck. I thought i was desensitized to this after the whole Ice Blossom fiasco. Guess I was right
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I’d have pegged you as wine connoisseur
No sooner had the wick lit did she slide the lighter back
but now, the that tension is gone
1. Wouldn't it normally be: 'A wine connoisseur?'
2. Slid.
3. But now, that the tension is gone.
7340695 Only two of those were actually in need of correction.
Slid would have been correct if the wording, but this is actually a variant of the no "sooner... than" phrasing used to indicate one thing happening and the other immediately following. Not to mention that no matter how you look at it, "No sooner had she lit the wick did she slid..." does not at all look right.
7340767 Oh yeah, I forget that I kept chunks of the sentences for a reason at times. At least this helps keep track of things. Though I might forget again...
Damn.... Welp, I'm gonna keep an eye on this story, you've officially gotten me hooked on this series!
Well we had tragedy before, now we have HP lovecraft invading EQ Girls verse, where's Pinkie Q from where no pony has gone before when you need her.
I understand Silver is the main character but... If we are talking about dimensional problem or beasts from another dimension... Why her and not someone like Discord?
7370042 Though it is more a matter of time than space, there are a few reasons why it is happening this way. Firstly, of course, is plot convenience. Let's face it: Discord would likely be able to head off this invasion with his reality warping abilities, but where would the fun be in that? Besides, say this creature is growing stronger from what it feeds on every time the clock rolls back. Wouldn't that imply that if it somehow did manage to consume Discord, it would be very, very bad? On another point, even if he's been on his best behavior for the better part of two decades, you don't just send your pet chaos daemon outside of your sphere of control and expect him to continue behaving himself.
Next, there's the matter of the predestination paradox/causal loop. The present Silver Script went through because of the message her past future self sent. We know from Silver's own history that she has a hard time leaving things unfinished if she believes she can achieve it herself, and she's never let death get in her way before. Whatever the circumstances were that sent the previous iteration of Silver Script through, she obviously believed that she could steer things in the right direction with more of her tools on hand.
7370482 Thank you for answer :)